I Love You, Sister

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05. Title: I Love You, Sister

Plot: After years of hard work, Jonghyun is finally the most popular celebrity in Asia. He hadn't been home in years and rarely contacted his family. He gets home, finds out his sister was diagnosed of cancer and is slowly growing weak and fragile. Rest is up to you.

Foreword

AUTHOR'S NOTE: This is a oneshot test given by Exquisite, which is currently under renovation now and will be back soon? The captain still isn't sure yet but Exquisite will be back and better than ever. So apparently, a task has been given to us, to see if we can write well. This is the plot I've chosen, it will be angst, and I can't promise a Happily Ever After, but you'll love it. So take a deep breath, and when you're ready, click 'next'. That is, when I've posted the oneshot. Until then do patiently wait, because I'm pretty sure you won't be disappointed. 

SPECIAL THANKS TO: For this oneshot especially I'd like to thank the people who have been waiting so long for me to post this, and I've started writing this even during my exam period, which I'm not supposed to but I wanted to get it done. I know I haven't been updating my other stories, for you all subscribers/readers, but I will, after this is posted. And be sure to check out my other stories, because I have a lot of other oneshots, many of them posted in A Writer's Canvas.

DISCLAIMER: I do not own the plot, as you can see, nor do I own the characters and anything affiliated to them. The events in this story is only fiction, and this is only for enjoyment purposes. 

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OnASnowyDay #1
That's just AMAZING. Jonghyun and Taeyeon would make really good siblings, and this one-shot was just beautiful. It has all the right feelings and right words to make it seem real. It almost is like this actually happened. Wah, just awesome.
sooyeon-ie #2
It's...beautiful. So sad, so full of angst, but so, so beautiful. I'm actually crying right now, but this is amazing. Beyond amazing, even.
aleric #3
/*roughly wipes away tear*




damn tammy! ;_; this is so beautiful. Yeah, even I thought that Taeyeon and Jonghyun would make good siblings and I wished they really were :D they would be heaps popular as idol siblings don't you think? :) so I'm really happy you decided to write a one-shot about them! <33 x I loved it btw, it's definitely going to be on my recommendations list if I do make one in the future <33 x you even managed to put a little jongsica and taeteuk ;_; <3 x you're amazing (you probably already heard me say that!) :D you you truly are! x i'm so proud ;_;
candiedwebs #4
Eh, eh, eh! I chose this one for the test as well! XD Although mine ... -.-
SAPPHiREDREAMs #5
This...this is my favorite piece from you yet.<br />
I simply adored every single part of this, yes, even the JongSica parts. I mean, you know I don't like them, so for me saying that I enjoyed those parts.<br />
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THIS WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT!<br />
I miss your TaeTeuk writing...gah, they're too beautiful. ;~; And it's incredibly romantic that Leeteuk possibly wanted to stay single because he only loved Taeyeon<br />
My gosh.<br />
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This story teaches like so many lessons in life. Taeyeon is such a strong trooper, gosh, I love her.<br />
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You are spectacular, cousin. I love this. <3
SAPPHiREDREAMs #6
Tammy. Oh my gosh... T^T
gogumacouple #7
TT__TT<br />
this story is seriously touching!! tears almost escape from my eyes TT__TT<br />
really love this story.
ll0vex3_her #8
This is seriously touching, it made me cry. It's very realistic, although Taeyeon died, at least she taught them one very important lesson of life - always be happy. I love the way you portrayed Jonghyun, he's such a wonderful dongsaeng, brother. Poor Leeteuk, but at least he confessed, it would be worse if he didn't. Although the rest of his life would be...I don't know, empty without Taeyeon. And yes, Jjong has to continue with his career, his passion because I'm sure that's what Taeyeon wants and loves. Oh gosh..you're amazing<3
ShiroiParadise #9
Wow...I swear, my eyes were tearing up the whole time because this...is a subject so close to my heart. This really brought back memories; memories that I have never forgot that have been swimming in the back of my mind for quite a while now. You have once again touched me. I think that the ending was especially realistic because it was all for the better. They had to move on because you cannot freeze time. While the road behind you disappears, you have no choice but to follow that of the one unraveling before you. This truly was beautiful as always. Thank you for bringing forth those tears that I haven't shed in a while. I now will never forget she, who died of this horrible disease. Thank you.
dawnrose #10
Read it! It was super touching! <br />
It was amazing! ^^
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