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⟪ Han Yejin ⟫ by rickieflower
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Main Vocal
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Kara's Seungyeon
⟪ love interest ⟫ N/A

⟪ status ⟫ Chosen

My character!

And yup no love interest so yeah. Run free with your ocxbias dreams~!

 

⟪ TOTAL APPLICANTS ⟫ 00
⟪ LAST UPDATED ⟫ 01/28

⟪ Lead Dancer ⋮ 001 ⟫ 01
⟪ Main Vocal ⋮ 002 ⟫ Taken
⟪ Main Dancer ⋮ 003 ⟫ 02
⟪ Rapper ⋮ 004 ⟫ 01
⟪ Lead Vocal ⋮ 005 ⟫ 02

⟪ Author's Note ⟫ Sorry about the layout change. I've seen it happen to the other users too. Ignore it please~!

 
 
 
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⟪ Na Hareum ⟫ by GreenJade_Qiqi
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Lead Dancer
⟪ face-claim ⟫ 4minute's Sohyun
⟪ love interest ⟫ OC

⟪ status ⟫ Accepted

Hey Navy! Ok can I just say how much I love that you used Sohyun as your face claim? She is so pretty I cannot even.. But yeah. I also loved your KisungxHareum relationship. Its super realistic which is something that you don't see a lot of. But yeah, Hareum is accepted!

 
 
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⟪ Bae Riar ⟫ by ThatFandomDoeL
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Main Dancer
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Jang Haebyeol
⟪ love interest ⟫

⟪ status ⟫ Errored

Hello there! This is your first application right? Good job, you did a lot better than my first, but sadly it is still errored. First off, you didn't use the correct title, which you can on the turn in post, but that can be looked over. Another error is under the love interest section. The personality is supposed to be Sehun's personality, relationship+history is relationship between you and him and how everything started. You also left a lot of things blank, such as some things in the love interest section. And is it also possible to explain your password a bit? What about her is ferocious?

Other than that, everything else is pretty much ok. There are some nit-picky things I'm gonna point out though. Instead of copy pasting the link, could you instead hyperlink them? The urls kinda make it tougher to read. Also, if you could delete some of the empty bullets, that would help too. So the others and friends section could be deleted.
Your application is now accepted.

 
 
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⟪ Kang MiReum ⟫ by vixx_nnnnn
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Lead Vocal
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Ailee
⟪ love interest ⟫ BTS' Jin

⟪ status ⟫ Errored

Hello there Violet! I love love love how you used Ailee as your faceclaim. She's so pretty *o* But the main issue I have is with your talent twins. Like I mentioned, I'm not gonna be super leniant on this. You are applying for lead vocal, so none of your other talents can excel your dancing, and main dancer (or super amazing lead dancer)  can be your dance claim (unless lackluster), so Min from Miss A cannot be your dance claim. Your vocal choice is ok I suppose, though I would really prefer it if you made her singing twin a bit less powerful. Tiffany or Seohyun would be fine choices

Thats really the main problem. Just fix that and your done
Thank you for fixing it :)

 
 
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⟪ Chae hyunmi ⟫ by Kongsoup
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Main Dancer
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Yeeun/Ha:tfelt
⟪ love interest ⟫ OC

⟪ status ⟫ Accepted

Hello there Kongsoup! One sec, lemme cry over Yenny. She's so pretty! And tbh I couldve sworn she was older..... that awkward moments when Seungyeon is older than her o.o Anyways, yeah. No errors found by me, and your telent twins are fine as well!

 
 
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⟪ kim jihyun ⟫ by foryou_
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Rapper
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Jooyeon
⟪ love interest ⟫ Vixx Leo

⟪ status ⟫ Accepted

Jooyeon is so pretty ;; But yeah, nothing really was wrong. Chu passed~~

 
 
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⟪ Song Perrin ⟫ by WishIWasAzn
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Lead Vocal
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Park Yonghee
⟪ love interest ⟫ Beast Hyunseung

⟪ status ⟫ Accepted

Hello there! I just wanna say how I love love love how your character is from Greece. Very unique! Being a tomboy vocal isn't something you say very often either, so mroe points for you! And despite her boyish appearence and personality, her guilty pleasures make me love her more. And what I love best is  that she isn't a Mary-Sue at all so yayyyy!

 

I feel like she would make an interesting leader too. Being protective as well as a good listener are two big pluses for a leader, not to mention feeling lonely as one is very likely. However being tempermental and 'foul-mouthed' is something that will definately set her back as one. Hmmm.....

 

But yeah! Loved everything about her. Accepted~~ (I'll add in a picture later, wifi isn't being my friend right now xD)

 
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WishIWasAzn
#1
Chapter 6: Huzzah A new chapter!!!!! I love love love this story. it's different from the other group stories i've seen so it's really refreshing x3 i totally understand about school being stressful because i'm in the same boat T_T the semester ends in 2 and a half weeks and I have so many tests and homeworks and projects due before that time :D

I really think the group will go together nicely even if it is a bit rough at the beginning :) can't wait to read more!!!
WishIWasAzn
#2
Chapter 5: My gosh Yejin doesn't like anyone :/ hahahahaha it's kinda funny in an unfortunate way. Congrats to all the girls chosen! And thank you for choosing my character!

The first chapter was really interesting. I like how we got to see everyone through Yejin's eyes, even if she doesn't like many of them hahahaha. I can understand the resentment from wanting to be an artist, not an idol, though. The girls are all really different and it is really cool :) I can't wait to read more
WishIWasAzn
#3
Chapter 4: I'm glad you liked her hahahaha :) I was a bit worried when I submitted that it would be a weird addition to everyone that had already applied but I'm glad you liked her! Thanks for the feedback too :) Hwaiting!
snaekeu #4
Chapter 2: I am very interested and have already started working on my application! But I wanted to ask you a question, For the talent twin; Would it also count if I added two videos, One as an example of singing and one as an example of dancing? Since my character *If you choose to accept me that is* would be the main dancer.
WishIWasAzn
#5
Chapter 2: I hope to apply soon! this looks really cool and a lot different from other stories I've come across :)