no love like tough love

Description

pairing: chanyeol/kai; luhan/minseok
rating: pg
genre: fluff
word count: 7.7k
summary: in which kyungsoo is a difficult little thing, luhan’s a helicopter parent and chanyeol does not like jongin. not one bit.

>>basically chanyeol works in a daycare, luhan and xiumin are kyungsoo's parents and kyungsoo is really just a stubborn little brat. but he's a cute little brat. jongin is just his sweet and awkward self and chanyeol is an to him for no real reason.


 

Foreword

Note: This is a repost from SNCJ Reverse BB, but I have also edited it and added to it since then. Here's the orginal post though, if anyone's interested ♥♥. Also, credits to the orginal artist of the artwork that went with this piece: yoya. It was an honor getting the privledge to write a story for such a wonderful piece of art and hopefully this story is now slightly less terrbile and more worthy of this awesome picture.

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blueskysoo
#1
Chapter 1: this is so cuteeeee. I love every characters here and the progress and realization about each of their actions and feelings.

and minseok hahahaha
cupcakesforme #2
Chapter 1: this is so cute!
cherrychipmunk
#3
Chapter 1: Omo! Kyungsoo is a devil-child OR WHAT??! kkk- this is what I call Satansoo- even at the age of Four X'D
Damn, Author-nim, now I know why I'm such a fan of your writing. The Depth! In just one oneshot. Like, three substories. You go into each and every character! And the depth! And... I love every character!!! Like, Luhan's overbearingness was just RLAB in the beginning!! And then... the reason behind it? That. You don't see in your average fanfic. I mean, sure, you get them all gay, but the deepness- like, their determination to have a better family than a straight family (okay, that sentence was very badly strung, but you get what I mean), well, your fanfics are the only place I've seen that addressed. And how Minseok, who appears uncrazy, actually checks on soo EVERYDAY!! Lovable, those two are, in spite of their craziness. And I love the real emotions you show- like Chanyeol, trying so hard not to be a failure, and his jealousy! Damn, I love his jealousy! And- it's so untypical. He's not jealous over love, he's jealous of Kai's success!
And no, I doubt I ever properly liked kyungsoo (don't get me wrong, I loved his evilness- but I can't put up with kids like that) and because of that, I liked Chanyeol even more. That's another thing. Your characters jinjja support each other. Oh, and I like what you did there with 'unidentified flying object'!! X'D -I love the part where Soo cries- damn, I can relate with Chanyeol (and ironically, with Soo too) And the conclusion of the Chankai subplot- I love the fact Chanyeol admits his jealousy!! And when they ..get together? they are so awkward, it's CUTE! Man, I'd forgotten how MUCH I've missed your writing ~<3
Lovely_Smile #4
Chapter 1: This was a really cute fic and Kyungsoo was just too adorable.
LavenderDreams #5
Chapter 1: This fic is really good, i don't know why i was very moved when i read Chanyeol's story (about his studies and what his parents can think about it..) it's very intelligent to talk about issues like that :) so bravo author-nim :)
i'd like a lot a sequel to this very cute and beautiful fanfic' ?
:)
with more Chansoo and more Chankai
keep going, fighting ! ^^