Creaking Doors

Description

 

SeKaiLu!because Kai is always trap in-between.

 

Foreword

 

Title: Creaking Doors

Pairing: past!Sehun/Kai, complicated!Kai/Luhan, exo!sidepairings

Rating: PG-13

Word count: 15,410

Summary: The return of Sehun sends Jongin into turmoil.

A/N: I kept on re-editing this for days on end but it still greatly lacks of something. This probably wouldn’t make any sense but I refuse to just throw this one away for the effort I put into it. And because MID reminded me that this group already lost two members, but I still love them all.

 

I gladly appreciate any constructive criticism so don’t be afraid to write them out.

 

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deerestkrrong #1
the first part screams kailu sooo bad that i was like asdfghjkl they really belong together and i am so so so madlt in love with them hahaha but then sehun returned and i wanted to smack jongin but we can't deny sekai bc sekai's also bam (u know what i mean? haha) but then ughh the ending! i love you! bless u and please write more kailu! xx
slash #2
Chapter 1: Arghhhh the feels. You had me rooting for Sekai for half the story then BAM! Kailu feels struck and ugh. I'm just happy okay? Don't mind my incorrigible comment.
Wasabisoul #3
Chapter 1: This story is just so beautiful and so well written, your caracterization are the end of the world. ; u ; I cried so much while I was reading the story, but I think ( and the end with Kyungsoo makes me think ) that they are all in lovr with Jongin. I mean Sehun felt in loce with him, and so did Luhan but I think that also Kyungsoo did it. I don't know, maybe it's because everytime Jongin closes the door there's also a part of description when you inform the reader that there's also Kyungsoo.
And I just worshipped the final part ( the decision of the film ), it made me laugh so hard that I couldn't stop myself from waking up my relatives. AHAHAHHAAH, Baekhyun you're very something. I adore your writing, sorry if I made mistakes but English is not my first language ( it isn't even my second ahah ). Byeeee ~ ♡
blu-han #4
Chapter 1: This was great, I felt so sorry for lu but im happy kailu got together in the end. I also think your characterization is really good
kikicarolinajung #5
Chapter 1: omg omg omg
its been a while since i read a very good-read kailu's fiction
this is so good no omg very very well written
jongin is a (ok he is not, it just he get confused bcs he feel sorry and realize after so many times, sehun still this precious to him)
but luhan, i adore him so much in here. it just...so luhan
you drew kailu's character so damn well
and the ending, okay at least luhan who lusting and falling to deep in jongin, and jongin who want to love him more than he love sehun, are enough to make me happy
i miss kailu so much, i miss them
thank you, u made my day <3
zaraaki #6
Chapter 1: So in the end its kailu...... Feels somehow like the song 'erase'
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