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Beamyada Wattapanit/Beam

position: Leader, Main dancer, Vocalist.
love interest: Joy of Red Velvet.
rival: Jeon Wonho (OC)
face claim: Anni.
status: Chosen.
applicant: Dalkomhan


author's comments: This is my intaglio character named Beam. She'll be the second foreign leader after F(x)'s first foreign leader, Victoria and the difference between them is just the ethnicity and dissimilar ages. Beam has the potential to keeping her group-mates be nice to each other. More to be coming up soon. This is just a brief information. I'll finished my app form sooner and I'm still gathering more applicants. So, don't be afraid to apply!

Bang Saera/Saera

position: Lead Vocalist, Maknae.
love interest: Oh Hayoung of APink.
love rival/rival: None atm.
face claim: Mu Ni.
status: Accepted.
applicant: mollygirl


author's comments: Thank you for being the first applicant and giving a try to apply for my first apply fanfiction, Molly! First of all, her personality told me something about her identity in details and her background story sending a logic reason of why she must have to grow up as less socializing. She's cool! I don't find anything wrong with your app. You're accepted! ♥

Ji Harin/G

position: Vocalist, Sub-rapper, Visual.
love interest: None atm.
love rival/rival: None atm.
face claim: Yoo Hyunjin.
status: Accepted.
applicant: hafarinfin


author's comments: Happy hello there, Fin! The simpleness of your character's name and her stage looks fine and normally good. Her nicknames are all useful, I'm glad you'd listed such a creative nicknames and she's 150cm? Some people would love to teases her later and that's interesting. She likes bread, what a rare girl! I find it'd more funner knowing she's scared of teddy bears and had an allergic to perfume. I chuckles and find her whole habits was cute! You mentioned VIXX and BTS multiple times on her trivia, she must be a huge fan of them. Haha. However, I spot a minor mistake on your app but don't worry, it's just a small error. Your talking twin should be a girl. Please fix that and you're good to go! ♥

charactername/stagename

position: (you can link the app to the character name)
love interest:
love rival/rival:
face claim:
applicant: username


author's comments: Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Donec facilisis lobortis massa, vel pretium lacus facilisis sed. Phasellus condimentum quis erat sit amet rhoncus. Duis vulputate, sem vel varius rhoncus, augue diam malesuada augue, non porttitor massa sem eget leo. Aenean commodo vulputate sapien vel luctus. Nullam nec convallis mauris. Donec et nulla faucibus, mattis tellus eget, iaculis eros. Proin imperdiet tincidunt interdum. Suspendisse id pharetra ante. Maecenas volutpat consequat eros at condimentum. Ut et eros dolor. Pellentesque sodales lacus nec pretium dignissim.  

co-author's comments: Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Donec facilisis lobortis massa, vel pretium lacus facilisis sed. Phasellus condimentum quis erat sit amet rhoncus. Duis vulputate, sem vel varius rhoncus, augue diam malesuada augue, non porttitor massa sem eget leo. Aenean commodo vulputate sapien vel luctus. Nullam nec convallis mauris. Donec et nulla faucibus, mattis tellus eget, iaculis eros. Proin imperdiet tincidunt interdum. Suspendisse id pharetra ante. Maecenas volutpat consequat eros at condimentum. Ut et eros dolor. Pellentesque sodales lacus nec pretium dignissim.  

charactername/stagename

position: (you can link the app to the character name)
love interest:
love rival/rival:
face claim:
applicant: username


author's comments: Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Donec facilisis lobortis massa, vel pretium lacus facilisis sed. Phasellus condimentum quis erat sit amet rhoncus. Duis vulputate, sem vel varius rhoncus, augue diam malesuada augue, non porttitor massa sem eget leo. Aenean commodo vulputate sapien vel luctus. Nullam nec convallis mauris. Donec et nulla faucibus, mattis tellus eget, iaculis eros. Proin imperdiet tincidunt interdum. Suspendisse id pharetra ante. Maecenas volutpat consequat eros at condimentum. Ut et eros dolor. Pellentesque sodales lacus nec pretium dignissim.  

co-author's comments: Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Donec facilisis lobortis massa, vel pretium lacus facilisis sed. Phasellus condimentum quis erat sit amet rhoncus. Duis vulputate, sem vel varius rhoncus, augue diam malesuada augue, non porttitor massa sem eget leo. Aenean commodo vulputate sapien vel luctus. Nullam nec convallis mauris. Donec et nulla faucibus, mattis tellus eget, iaculis eros. Proin imperdiet tincidunt interdum. Suspendisse id pharetra ante. Maecenas volutpat consequat eros at condimentum. Ut et eros dolor. Pellentesque sodales lacus nec pretium dignissim.  

charactername/stagename

position: (you can link the app to the character name)
love interest:
love rival/rival:
face claim:
applicant: username


author's comments: Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Donec facilisis lobortis massa, vel pretium lacus facilisis sed. Phasellus condimentum quis erat sit amet rhoncus. Duis vulputate, sem vel varius rhoncus, augue diam malesuada augue, non porttitor massa sem eget leo. Aenean commodo vulputate sapien vel luctus. Nullam nec convallis mauris. Donec et nulla faucibus, mattis tellus eget, iaculis eros. Proin imperdiet tincidunt interdum. Suspendisse id pharetra ante. Maecenas volutpat consequat eros at condimentum. Ut et eros dolor. Pellentesque sodales lacus nec pretium dignissim.  

co-author's comments: Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit. Donec facilisis lobortis massa, vel pretium lacus facilisis sed. Phasellus condimentum quis erat sit amet rhoncus. Duis vulputate, sem vel varius rhoncus, augue diam malesuada augue, non porttitor massa sem eget leo. Aenean commodo vulputate sapien vel luctus. Nullam nec convallis mauris. Donec et nulla faucibus, mattis tellus eget, iaculis eros. Proin imperdiet tincidunt interdum. Suspendisse id pharetra ante. Maecenas volutpat consequat eros at condimentum. Ut et eros dolor. Pellentesque sodales lacus nec pretium dignissim.  

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kmcl21
#1
Chapter 3: Hi~ I submitted my app already. But if you haven't seen it yet, here it is :)
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/972488
Thank you! :)
-yeonjungs
#2
Chapter 3: I'll apply!
mollygirl
#3
Chapter 3: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked Saera. Good luck.
dreamshade
#4
Chapter 3: i've fixed my app ^^
dreamshade
#5
done with my app

http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/971492

hope you like it ^^