With this letter [ONESHOT]

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i know i'm not done with Challenge Against Fate yet, but this is just something that was tugging my mind today.

don't kill me! <3

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Lyca_Myx #1
Chapter 1: WAaaaiiit.. WAA!!!!!!! I'm here dumbfounded...*sigh* I love them both and one of them has to die
gjie2cute #2
this is beautiful really :D thank you for sharing this
chasingbom #3
Omo! Top died in the war! Poor Bommie! :(
ChoomKat #4
Kay37541: your comment made my day! <3 i was thinking about oneshots for the past few weeks and just couldn't put anything together. i saw a TOP picture and it inspired me to write this. i was skeptical and thought it to be a fail but posted it anyways because i'm just stubborn. i'm really glad you like it! a mind reader? really?? awww cool!!! ^^v it's ok to rant, i love ranting too haha<br />
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Nikkylee0596, gwiyeounjiyeon: :'( sorry!
gwiyeounjiyeon #5
OHMY GOD :(<br />
this is so sad :( <br />
topbom :(
Nikkylee0596
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aww so sad :''(<br />
the letter is really touching :''(
Kay37541 #7
T_________T *sobs*<br />
omg I first thought that Top left Bom because he didn't love her anymore or he just grew tired of her:( The date of the letter seemed pretty strange too! But when Bom opened the package and there was a hat, I literally gasped out loud!!!! <br />
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This one shot deserved a standing ovation. Sure the ending wasn't a happy one, but it was beautifully written:) I've always wanted to read a story somewhere along the lines of this! <br />
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I swear you are a mind reader!!! First, a wanted a story where Top is Bommie's bodyguard, and BAM you created Challenge Against Fate. And last week I was thinking about a Topbom tragic soldier/wife story and you came out with this fabulous one shot! ^_^<br />
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Hehe I tend to rant:) But seriously, thank you for this! You really are blessed with wonderful writing skills:D