Chapter Four

You Captivate Me
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The day of the big party, Suwoong was excited. He would finally have a chance to meet Minsu's friends and coworkers. Getting dressed for work, he pulled out the light blue button up he would take with him to change into after work for the party. Grinning, he texted Minsu, telling him how excited he was to meet his friends. Minsu's only response was an emodicon of him rolling his eyes, which made the younger man laugh. He smiled as he walked out to the parking lot, getting into his car. He would drive himself to work, for once.  

 

The hours flew by, and before Suwoong knew it, his lunch time had come. Sighing, he glanced at Sunwoo, grinning. "Would you like to go to lunch with me? We can go get burgers or something. I'm starving!" 

 

Sunwoo smiled back at him, shutting his computer down. "Sure. That would be great. I'm hungry, too. Let's go." They left work, driving to the diner they had chosen. Suwoong told him about his best friend and how he was going to a company party that evening. Sunwoo asked him if it was the same friend who had visited his work several times, and laughed when Suwoong blushed while answering him. After they finished eating, Sunwoo began driving back to work. Halfway there, Suwoong felt as if he head was spinning, sharp pains stabbing him in the side. 

 

Sunwoo glanced at him, concerned. "Dude, you don't look good."
 
 

Suwoong shook his head, the action intensifying the queasy feeling. "Could you pull over?" As soon as Sunwoo pulled over, Suwoong stepped out of the car, puking in the grass. He put one hand on the car to steady himself, shaking. 

 

 

Sunwoo watched him carefully, worried. "I'm going to call in for you, okay? This isn't cool." Suwoong's only response was a weak nod as he stumbled back into the car, slumping against the seat. Sunwoo was already on his phone talking to Wonjun. He drove back to work quickly, asking a friend to drive his own car to Suwoong's house while he took the sick man's car home. When they got there, Sunwoo became very worried about Suwoong when he barely made it up the steps. 

 

 

Minsu glanced at his phone, unsure of why his friend wasn't answering. He should have been off from his work and had promised that he would go to the party. Now it was 7:00, and the party had already started, but he hadn't heard anything from Suwoong. Shaking his head, he turned to see Sungjun motioning toward the front of the room. The representitives from the entertainment companies had arrived, holding clipboards. 

 

Minsu knew the auditions would begin soon, and that was nerve-wracking. He waited for his turn, glancing at his phone again. There still wasn't an answer from Suwoong, so he figured his friend had decided not to come or had simply forgotten about it. Either way was annoying, since this was a big moment in his life. This could determine whether he stayed at the dance studio or was picked for a company, so it could change his life forever. He would have liked for his friend to be part of that. 

 

"Park Sungjun, would you come up here, please?" The representitive called him over the loud speaker. 

 

Sungjun took a deep breath, grinning at his friend nervously. "Here goes nothing." Minsu gave him a thumbs up sign, grinning back at him. He walked up onto the stage, beginning his dance routine, his movements very fluid, as Minsu knew they would be. While he watched his friend dance, his mind returned to Suwoong. The younger man still hadn’t replied, and he knew he would go onto the stage soon. When Sungjun walked back off the stage, Minsu grinned at him nervously. He knew that he would be up soon, hoping that his friend

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Jeitzamorales #1
Chapter 4: Please make more chapters please
lovekiller_tsuna
#2
Chapter 4: Aww, so cute... ^_^
exoczen
#3
OMG... Did't know you have BR fanfic... Thanks for writing about them... :D
Lee SuWoong, btw is the iest for me... XD
Amalya
#4
Chapter 4: Why do all the people have Su names?! lol This is one of the few times I'm a little frustrated that I don't know who they are exactly, even though it doesn't effect the underlying story. It just means I have to read carefully and really pay attention. haha

Interesting story that leans more towards slice of life than anything else. There are definitely fluffy moments and the whole situation with Suwoong at work is totally understandable. While I understood the need to have some sort of upset, the nature of it was a bit confusing to me. If he's good with computers, one would imagine he would have an idea of what the 'strange' file was. Then again, I have very little idea myself considering my skills are pretty... basic. haha What does it mean to unblock a file anyway? For the semi-computer illiterate, it would have been nice to know. ;)

Otherwise, you were definitely quite clear with Minsu's interest which made sense as to was why Sungjun had no trouble in picking up on it. How long had they been rooming together for? With the 'obsession' as it was termed, I would have imagined a more long term setup. And I was a little bemused that Minsu wasn't allowed to take care of his own burn. lol

I did appreciate how you threw in that little hiccup in Suwoong not actually making it by to see Minsu because of food poisoning. Sounded like he had a pretty bad case of it indeed. I've only got hearsay to go on but it's apparently pretty nasty. >.> I'm not exactly surprised he ended up in the hospital. :/ I also found it funny how Suwoong realized what the other man felt under the effects of the painkillers or medicine or whatever it was he was on. Sometimes we see things clearer when we're otherwise impaired and that's strangely adorable. heh

The ending was cute too, though I didn't think the ual reference was quite needed. It takes away from the fluffiness. T_T lol But maybe that's just me. Overall, I'm glad that things worked out...
SongRachel
#5
Chapter 3: Awwww, how sweet !!!

Minsuu aaaaa, look at suwoong's affection ! It's so obvious that He likes you back ! ASDDFGHHJKL
SongRachel
#6
Chapter 1: Awwww suwoong !!! You're soo cute :3
TheBadAss
#7
Chapter 4: It was sad that suwoong was in hospital but it was the sweetest ending i loved it!
veelahvi
#8
Which country are you from? Just collecting data for a side research... since you have some odd phrases here and there. If you feel uncomfortable saying, no need to enlighten me ahahah

Oh, weeee... I love it when people refer to him by his name, Wonjun. :D Suwoong and his office work. Reminds me of that Misaeng version of their MV lmao, with Wonjun as the company prez. and suwoong as the intern (minus Sunwoo throwing files in his face). Should I be worried for Suwoong when there's a system error? Why am I laughing? XD Awww, Wonjun is such a nice boss. I'd work for him. Would there really be a boss like him though in real life? Telling his employee to rest up after making more work for him? :X When Wonjun said he knows Suwoong is successful at clearing files... why does it sound like sarcasm? LMAO

Awww, childhood friends being roomies.

Oh, so was it sarcasm? LOL Poor Suwoong, crying in his room. At least he's got Minsu to comfort him. Some people have no one to turn to and that . What would Minsu do, actually? Go put up a one-man (or two-man) protest in front of the company? XD
kjunkkk
#9
Chapter 3: WOW THIS WAS ACTUALLY REALLY GOOD! There aren't a lot of good Boy's Republic fanfics but this was really good I really enjoyed it.
Chi-KimChi
#10
I FINALLY FOUND A BR FANFIC WORTH READING THANK GOD.

BLESS YOU.