Chapter Three

You Captivate Me
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Over the next week, Minsu took every opportunity to drive Suwoong to work. He ignored the younger man's comments about having his own car and being independent, using the excuse that he wanted to save gasoline. Each day he waited patiently in the parking lot for Suwoong and smiling when he told him all about his day. Every moment with him was precious and he held onto it all tightly. It didn't matter to him that Suwoong would about acting like his mother. Minsu found that amusing, but also adorable. 

 

One day, Minsu was approached by Sungjun. The dancer was grinning at him, causing Minsu to roll his eyes. He knew his friend was about to ask him to do something that might be out of his comfort zone, but he smiled back quietly. 

 

"Hey, Sungjun. What's up?" He asked the question nervously, not sure he wanted to hear the answer. 

 

Sungjun laughed, his eyes gleaming with excitement. "Our first big company party. I hear there might be promotions and the chance to move to being a back up dancer for a group! Wouldn't that be awesome? I'm excited!"

 

Minsu grinned at him, suddenly nervous. "You know, if this is a huge deal, there will likely be scouts from entertainent companies. This could be a big opportnity for any of us. What time will it be?" 

 

Sungjun glanced at the paper in his hand, then back at his friend. "It's supposed to start at 7:00 next Saturday night. You're going, right?" 

 

Minsu frowned at him, nodding. "Of course! If this could be an opportunity to be picked up by an entertainment company, I'll definitely be there. Thank you for letting me know about it." He wrote the date on his hand, excited about telling Suwoong about it. It would be the perfect opportunity to introduce his coworkers to his best friend. 

 

Sungjun was quiet for a moment, then smiled softly. "What about Suwoong? Are you inviting him to go with you...maybe as your date?" 

 

Minsu rolled his eyes, laughing. "No, not as a date, but yes, I'll definitely invite him."

 

Sungjun snickered at him, reaching into his locker to grab his change of clothes. "Well...I think you should bring him as your date. It's not like you're not attracted to him, and you're perfect for each other." He laughed at the dry look Minsu shot him. "Okay. I can take a hint. I'll back off and let you deal with it...for the next fifty years." 

 

Minsu sighed, shaking his head. He was about to strangle Sungjun. Sometimes his friend was just too honest and straight forward, but he was right, and that trut

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Jeitzamorales #1
Chapter 4: Please make more chapters please
lovekiller_tsuna
#2
Chapter 4: Aww, so cute... ^_^
exoczen
#3
OMG... Did't know you have BR fanfic... Thanks for writing about them... :D
Lee SuWoong, btw is the iest for me... XD
Amalya
#4
Chapter 4: Why do all the people have Su names?! lol This is one of the few times I'm a little frustrated that I don't know who they are exactly, even though it doesn't effect the underlying story. It just means I have to read carefully and really pay attention. haha

Interesting story that leans more towards slice of life than anything else. There are definitely fluffy moments and the whole situation with Suwoong at work is totally understandable. While I understood the need to have some sort of upset, the nature of it was a bit confusing to me. If he's good with computers, one would imagine he would have an idea of what the 'strange' file was. Then again, I have very little idea myself considering my skills are pretty... basic. haha What does it mean to unblock a file anyway? For the semi-computer illiterate, it would have been nice to know. ;)

Otherwise, you were definitely quite clear with Minsu's interest which made sense as to was why Sungjun had no trouble in picking up on it. How long had they been rooming together for? With the 'obsession' as it was termed, I would have imagined a more long term setup. And I was a little bemused that Minsu wasn't allowed to take care of his own burn. lol

I did appreciate how you threw in that little hiccup in Suwoong not actually making it by to see Minsu because of food poisoning. Sounded like he had a pretty bad case of it indeed. I've only got hearsay to go on but it's apparently pretty nasty. >.> I'm not exactly surprised he ended up in the hospital. :/ I also found it funny how Suwoong realized what the other man felt under the effects of the painkillers or medicine or whatever it was he was on. Sometimes we see things clearer when we're otherwise impaired and that's strangely adorable. heh

The ending was cute too, though I didn't think the ual reference was quite needed. It takes away from the fluffiness. T_T lol But maybe that's just me. Overall, I'm glad that things worked out...
SongRachel
#5
Chapter 3: Awwww, how sweet !!!

Minsuu aaaaa, look at suwoong's affection ! It's so obvious that He likes you back ! ASDDFGHHJKL
SongRachel
#6
Chapter 1: Awwww suwoong !!! You're soo cute :3
TheBadAss
#7
Chapter 4: It was sad that suwoong was in hospital but it was the sweetest ending i loved it!
veelahvi
#8
Which country are you from? Just collecting data for a side research... since you have some odd phrases here and there. If you feel uncomfortable saying, no need to enlighten me ahahah

Oh, weeee... I love it when people refer to him by his name, Wonjun. :D Suwoong and his office work. Reminds me of that Misaeng version of their MV lmao, with Wonjun as the company prez. and suwoong as the intern (minus Sunwoo throwing files in his face). Should I be worried for Suwoong when there's a system error? Why am I laughing? XD Awww, Wonjun is such a nice boss. I'd work for him. Would there really be a boss like him though in real life? Telling his employee to rest up after making more work for him? :X When Wonjun said he knows Suwoong is successful at clearing files... why does it sound like sarcasm? LMAO

Awww, childhood friends being roomies.

Oh, so was it sarcasm? LOL Poor Suwoong, crying in his room. At least he's got Minsu to comfort him. Some people have no one to turn to and that . What would Minsu do, actually? Go put up a one-man (or two-man) protest in front of the company? XD
kjunkkk
#9
Chapter 3: WOW THIS WAS ACTUALLY REALLY GOOD! There aren't a lot of good Boy's Republic fanfics but this was really good I really enjoyed it.
Chi-KimChi
#10
I FINALLY FOUND A BR FANFIC WORTH READING THANK GOD.

BLESS YOU.