Chapter One

You Captivate Me
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“Just work on this program, okay?” Suwoong’s new supervisor, Wonjun, smiled at him reassuringly. “Let me know when you’re finished.” 

 

“Okay. Thank you, sir. I’ll get it done ASAP,” the young man grinned nervously, his eyes widening as he turned back to the computer screen. He had done this exact task several times at home and also in training, so he was confident in his ability. The part that was making him nervous was having his boss sitting next to him, watching. Turning all of his attention to the screen, he opened a file and began typing. His tension lessened when he noticed Wonjun stand up and exit the room. 

 

Taking a deep breath, he concentrated on his work fully, unblocking files, as he had been instructed to do. He knew that this was a test to see how he worked on his own, away from his supervisor, but it was still stressful. Trying to remain calm, he unblocked several files, smiling to himself at his success. 

 

However, he froze when he came to a file that looked completely different. Cocking his head to the side in curiosity, he opened it and read it over. Deciding that it looked safe, he unblocked it, just as he had done with the others. The computer screen flashed black, and the young man bit his lower lip, holding his breath. His fears were realized when he saw the screen come back on, with red letters scrolling across it: SYSTEM ERROR. Before he had time to do anything else, the computer shut off again and wouldn’t turn back on. 

 

“,” Suwoong cursed loudly, slamming his hand down onto the desk. Now he was shaking, certain that he had just ruined everything in the company. 

 

Standing to his feet unsteadily, he walked to Wonjun’s office and knocked on the door. “Come in!” He winced when he heard his boss’ voice, fearing that he would be fired on the spot. 

 

“Sir,” he swallowed hard again, feeling his stomach churn. “I think something’s wrong. Could I get you to check it out?” Suwoong hoped that Wonjun didn’t see that his hands were shaking. 

 

Wonjun smiled at him, closing the computer that he was working at. “Sure. Let’s go,” he put his hand on Suwoong’s shoulder as they both walked into the computer room. 

 

Suwoong felt a sense of dread wash over him as his boss looked at the computer and the other man’s face turned to concern. “Okay. I’m not sure what you hit, but this is a complete system fail.” His brow furrowed as he tried to press different keys, all without success. Sighing, Wonjun shook his head. “I’m going to have to call in my tech and h

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Jeitzamorales #1
Chapter 4: Please make more chapters please
lovekiller_tsuna
#2
Chapter 4: Aww, so cute... ^_^
exoczen
#3
OMG... Did't know you have BR fanfic... Thanks for writing about them... :D
Lee SuWoong, btw is the iest for me... XD
Amalya
#4
Chapter 4: Why do all the people have Su names?! lol This is one of the few times I'm a little frustrated that I don't know who they are exactly, even though it doesn't effect the underlying story. It just means I have to read carefully and really pay attention. haha

Interesting story that leans more towards slice of life than anything else. There are definitely fluffy moments and the whole situation with Suwoong at work is totally understandable. While I understood the need to have some sort of upset, the nature of it was a bit confusing to me. If he's good with computers, one would imagine he would have an idea of what the 'strange' file was. Then again, I have very little idea myself considering my skills are pretty... basic. haha What does it mean to unblock a file anyway? For the semi-computer illiterate, it would have been nice to know. ;)

Otherwise, you were definitely quite clear with Minsu's interest which made sense as to was why Sungjun had no trouble in picking up on it. How long had they been rooming together for? With the 'obsession' as it was termed, I would have imagined a more long term setup. And I was a little bemused that Minsu wasn't allowed to take care of his own burn. lol

I did appreciate how you threw in that little hiccup in Suwoong not actually making it by to see Minsu because of food poisoning. Sounded like he had a pretty bad case of it indeed. I've only got hearsay to go on but it's apparently pretty nasty. >.> I'm not exactly surprised he ended up in the hospital. :/ I also found it funny how Suwoong realized what the other man felt under the effects of the painkillers or medicine or whatever it was he was on. Sometimes we see things clearer when we're otherwise impaired and that's strangely adorable. heh

The ending was cute too, though I didn't think the ual reference was quite needed. It takes away from the fluffiness. T_T lol But maybe that's just me. Overall, I'm glad that things worked out...
SongRachel
#5
Chapter 3: Awwww, how sweet !!!

Minsuu aaaaa, look at suwoong's affection ! It's so obvious that He likes you back ! ASDDFGHHJKL
SongRachel
#6
Chapter 1: Awwww suwoong !!! You're soo cute :3
TheBadAss
#7
Chapter 4: It was sad that suwoong was in hospital but it was the sweetest ending i loved it!
veelahvi
#8
Which country are you from? Just collecting data for a side research... since you have some odd phrases here and there. If you feel uncomfortable saying, no need to enlighten me ahahah

Oh, weeee... I love it when people refer to him by his name, Wonjun. :D Suwoong and his office work. Reminds me of that Misaeng version of their MV lmao, with Wonjun as the company prez. and suwoong as the intern (minus Sunwoo throwing files in his face). Should I be worried for Suwoong when there's a system error? Why am I laughing? XD Awww, Wonjun is such a nice boss. I'd work for him. Would there really be a boss like him though in real life? Telling his employee to rest up after making more work for him? :X When Wonjun said he knows Suwoong is successful at clearing files... why does it sound like sarcasm? LMAO

Awww, childhood friends being roomies.

Oh, so was it sarcasm? LOL Poor Suwoong, crying in his room. At least he's got Minsu to comfort him. Some people have no one to turn to and that . What would Minsu do, actually? Go put up a one-man (or two-man) protest in front of the company? XD
kjunkkk
#9
Chapter 3: WOW THIS WAS ACTUALLY REALLY GOOD! There aren't a lot of good Boy's Republic fanfics but this was really good I really enjoyed it.
Chi-KimChi
#10
I FINALLY FOUND A BR FANFIC WORTH READING THANK GOD.

BLESS YOU.