Chapter 2 My Chingu and the Maknae

It's You [Neorago]

 

--Author’s  POV—

 

Ohh there’s a lot people here.. so crowded (Seoul Subway Station) Babbo Leigh of course wahh Seoul ..OMO so beautiful she thought as she walked out of the subway station. While walking down the streets of Seoul heading to a Bus Stop her phone suddenly rings   *Good luck by: Super Junior Happy

Hanbuhn mannabwa arabwa jarhaebwa...

Yuhgi ee nyuhsuhk sogaehaejulge kkotminamijiman ajigeun solo

Suhnggyuhkdo gwaenchanhgo uirido jikineun jinjuhnghan chingu…

 

“Omo someone is calling” she said as she bring out her phone from her pocket. She Answer the call while continue walking on the street to the Bus station.

 

Phone Conversation

Leigh:   Yoboseyo…?

 

Donghae:    Yah Chingu. Where are you? I just arrived here at Hello Kitty Café make it fast I wanna hug my best chingu. Oh Remember I’ll be wearing a Sapphire Blue Hoody with a big Animated Fish drawing on it arasso?

 

Leigh:   Neh Oppa.!

 

--Leigh POV—

 

 

I close my phone and return it back on my pocket  ”Aishhh at last destination Bus Stop” she mumbles to herself and stand on the waiting shed to wait for a Bus to come. After 5 minutes of waiting A bus stop right in front of here. Hell..! I want to scream using my fan girl mode she thought while staring at the bus…Guess what...? The Bus has a Super Junior Skin..! Haha She walked inside the bus and search for a vacant seat. After finding a vacant seat beside the window she sit down and arrange her bags, bring out her phone and Angry Bird earphone then click her playlist. First song to play: All my Heart by Super Junior. She enjoyed the view outside the window while waiting for the bus to stop at the Hello Kitty Café.

 

As I got off the bus I wave at it just like waving to a friend (Super Junior Skin) weird me right? Finally I’m here!

 

“Mwohhh!! HELLO KITTY..!! Kyeopta!” I said to myself while pushing the door of the café to open. As I enter the café I scan the place searching for a man wearing a Sapphire Blue Hoody. Then I notice this guy wearing the clothes I have been searching with his fishy grin. Even though Donghae oppa will not say what he will wear she will easily recognize him with his Fishy Childlike smile. Ohh he looks so stupid exaggeratingly waving at me... Yeah he easily recognized me. That’s my oppa. Ohh and he have a companion with him wearing a green hoody shirt and black shades. Wondering who is he…”Is he by chance my Yesung oppa.?” as thought came my heart beats faster  then walk straight to their table still staring at the man seating beside Donghae oppa.

 

--Donghae’s POV—

 

I suddenly got up from my seat and hug the girl in front of me, actually crushing her is the right term, even though she’s not saying anything I know she’s my Leigh with her innocent and shy smile one thing more reason why I recognize her is because she wore the tees I sent on her 20th birthday yeah that’s my Leigh a 20 year old lady wearing the gift I send her hehe... hmm wondering why she’s looking beside me curiously then I suddenly remember I’m with someone.

 

Donghae: Oh Leigh I really miss you chingu.

 

Leigh: Kya~ oppa I can’t breathe!

 

Donghae: Miss me best chingu?

 

Leigh: of course oppa very m much. 

 

Donghae: Chingu have seat.

 

As Leigh sit in front of me still looking at person beside me.

 

Donghae: Omo I forgot Leigh meet my co member and the evil maknae of Super Junior Cho Kyuhyun.

 

Kyuhyun: yah! Hyung whatever! Annyeong haseyo Leigh.

 

Leigh: A-annyeong haseyo Kyuhyun oppa. ..

 

 I thought its Yesung  she whispered suddenly.

 

--Kyuhyun’s POV—

 

As I hear the sound of the door chime of the café I stared at the girl who had just entered... Ohh a fan girl eh. You know what she wears? A black tees with a Chibi Yesung and a turtle and has a word *Yesung oppa Saranghae..!* printed on it... Ohh she’s looking at me what a cute girl as she walked slowly towards our table I notice my heartbeat beats very fast... oh oh.. what’s this.? A very familiar feeling. Then suddenly Donghae hyung introduce her to me, so this is the girl we have been waiting? Hyung’s childhood best friend?Interesting.... smiley

 

 

-- Author’s POV –

 

Donghae and Leigh talk likes there’s no tomorrow catching up the things happen to them while they are not together as if they enter their own world leaving Kyuhyun behind. The two only talking with each other Kyuhyun is so silent analyzing what he feels right now glancing at her every time she’s not aware. After two hours the three decided to leave the café and ride on Donghae’s car Leigh on the passenger seat, Kyuhyun on the backseat and Donghae as the driver.

 

After thirty minutes of ride they end up at the dorm unit where Leigh will be staying. Kyuhyun and Donghae help Leigh for her bags and put it inside the dorm unit after helping Leigh set up her things the two bid their goodbye’s to her. Kyuhyun first go out the dorm and wait Donghae outside.

 

Donghae ruffles Leigh’s hair then hug her before leaving and whisper in her ears “Chingu if you need anything just knock on the door in front of your dorm neh?” He smiled at her before leaving then he closed the door gently.

 

She was there in the living room still standing like a statue she just had receive the most shocking news.

 

“Kya~ Super Junior is my neighbor..!” she scream then dance like a crazy fan girl.

 

“Yesung oppa meet your destiny Kim Leigh .! Haha Oppa Saranghae! ”she murmured to herself contentedly.

 

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Authors Note:

 

Chingus Mianhe for not updating fast.. aissshh Final Exams are coming.. so much deadlines to meet and presentations.. hope you understand.. ^^, please leave a comment if you like you to make my day complete.. hehe cheeky

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youaremyhappiness
#1
Heyy chingu I'm back after a long time, but sad that I won't stay long T_T
Anyways, the story is so good so far ^_^ *UPDATE*
And yes I am Kyu bias :3 LOL
Oh and I also just saw the shout out, thanks so much chingu!!
LUBB YOU <333
fearless_elfzy
#2
unnie ..~~your stories so cool~~!
anj_yesung
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jotwinslove- thanks for the comment :) ^^,<br />
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pinaywriter-chingu salamat sa advice ha.. I really appreciate it.. haha sorry newbie.. ^^, hehehe<br />
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Blue_Sapphire- welcome.. hehe hope you like the short update ^^,<br />
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ILIKEHAESICA- heres the update ^^, hope you like it<br />
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youaremyhappiness- heres the update hehe :) Kyu bias.???<br />
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Bluerain- eehh thanks eonnie :) hehe <br />
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kpopaddictus95- hehe its ok.. miss your updates chingu :)
jotwinslove
#4
NICE~
pinaywriter
#5
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Chapte 3: The harsh comments<br />
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This .? doesn't mean anything. It's not a good idea to write with the wrong punctuation marks. It makes your work unpleasant to read for people who have experience with writing or editing. <br />
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Again, check your verb tenses. <br />
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The nice comments: <br />
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There were a lot of cute moments, comic relief and closeness moments. ^.^ So I like it. Remember to descibe things in the narration and not just put them as instructions. ^.~<br />
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Example : Imagine him doing a crazy dance can be like this <br />
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He moved his hips from side to side and made a manual rice grinder circular motion with his hands. It was like he scored a goal and doing "winning dance".
pinaywriter
#6
But seriously I am looking for the Evil Maknae's moves and her reactions.^>^
pinaywriter
#7
1. Mind your tenses. If the action is finished. Then put the right tense. <br />
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There seems to be too many P.O.V. ^.^ Oh well this is a fanfiction. ^.^<br />
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Advice: If you are shifting P.O.V. Do it novel style. ^>^ <br />
http://pinaywriteroraldiarrhea2.blogspot.com/2010/09/formatting-reminders-simplified-for.html<br />
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if you change POV or the scenery changes then it would best to make the first word in the paragraph BOLD. This is just to train you to make you write more like a writer and not just a blogger. ^.^ I have written tons of stuff in my life. And from what I have read back, some of them made me laugh, others made me go "Why the hell did I write this crap?" but ultimately, you want to improve or capture your imagination better. And formats are there for you so you can share it to others better. ^.^
pinaywriter
#8
harsh comments chapter 1 : 1. Talking to the reader is kinda weird but breaking that barrier is not a bad thing. There are no definite rules in writing a fan fic anyway. <br />
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2. kiss on the cheek. chick means girl chic means posh chik is I dunno what that is. <br />
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3. Do not capitalize stuff that are common names or nouns. <br />
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Great comments : It's very lively. ^>^ And the conversations are cute!!!
pinaywriter
#9
Special mention ako!!! eheehehhee