Star's fault.

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"I fell in love with you like when you fall asleep." he whispered.

"Slowly, slowly, and then deeply and completely" he finished.

Tears were shared. Words were said. Life was lived. Uncompletely.

"Please" the other begged "just one more day".

A run, against the time and the destiny, which both will lose.

Foreword

I saw the trailer of a new film which inspired...not, more like got me emoshinki. It will be not too long and not too short, just enough to let you know that you can't chose when and how to fall in love. Not even how much.

Lots of kisses,

dearJung

 

PS: character death. if you're sensible then don't read it.

PS2: It is the longest oneshot I've ever wrote. 30411 caracters and 6940 word. WOW *applause*

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nwh-gem #1
Chapter 1: jae! jaejoongie! kim jaejoong! omg baby! let me cry for yunho a lot more authornim! the story is simple , deep and complete, just like how jae loved yunho! and i love it! thank you for the good cry!
bottledaffection #2
Chapter 1: i know this fic has been years already but serously you gave all the emotion perfectly expressed. i am really a type of person who cried easily but this one really teared me up and i hate you for it!!!!!! thank you so much for writing this one. indeedly beautiful amazing although sad but the love is evidently seen.
jaeminlove #3
Chapter 1: its so beautiful and heart touching
thank u so much 4 sharing ur work
stanwendy #4
Chapter 1: This story is so sad, yet beautiful. :')

<3 Thanks so much for writing this :'3
dbsjcassielf #5
*blows snot on your comments section because of the fic*
TheSoulmate #6
Chapter 1: That was so beautiful... but still... yah... I had to cry a bit and now my eyes are burning :'(
The story is so simple but beautiful. I just knew you would be that kind of writer, who get's the feelings right to the point, so the reader feels them too...
Poor Yunho :'( it's so unfair....

anyways </3
Thanks for giving me the story soulmate it's so beautiful even though it's so super sad... <3
seiza32 #7
Chapter 1: Oh God..I can't believe I'm crying..and it has been too long since I cried over a story.. their love was so innocent yet so beautiful..tx for sharing it, dear..
AlwaysLoveJaeJoong #8
Chapter 1: I am crying so hard...
phinea2009 #9
Chapter 1: This is such a sad story. Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading it very much.
aktfTVXQ9 #10
Chapter 1: It's so painful. Their bittersweet love!!!
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