Unlucky in love

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Luck. The one thing that she has eating out of the palm of her hand. Love. The one thing she didn't have luck with but truly desired.
Luck. The one thing he wished her to have. Love. The one thing he could never give her.

Foreword

Kim Hye Su had everything she ever wished for in the world, she was from a rich background with a doting father and loving brothers. She always had luck on her side. However there was one thing where luck failed on her, LOVE. Hye su was unlucky when it came to love, whether it be she chose the wrong person or it just wasn't meant to be. What no one knew was she had a hopeless onesided crush on someone who was very close to her family. Oh Sehun.

Oh Sehun is the epitome of perfection. He came from a well off background, was popular, handsome and the ideal son/ son-in-law. Sehun was very close with the Kim family being friends with all 4 but best friends with the youngest master Kim. Sehun had known Hye Su all his life and was a close childhood friend of hers.

The person that Sehun was dating was Kim Cho Hee, the Kim sibling's stepsister. After the death of the Lady of the house, the Kim sibling's father married Cho Hee's mother (whose husband had died) and regarded Cho Hee as one of his daughters along with Hye Su. Hye Su who was not used to the attention being on anyone else but herself took an instant disliking to Cho Hee. In fact through out high school, they nicknamed Cho Hee Cinderella while Hye Su was deemed the evil stepsister. When Oh Sehun first met Cho Hee he instantly felt the need to protect her due to her meek personality slowing siding with her over Hye Su. Over the years as they grew Sehun and Cho Hee began to date and all the feelings that he held for Hye Su disappeared as Hye Su constantly threw unkind remarks at Cho Hee now and again.

However Hye Su's luck finally struck a diamond mine when it came to love as she found herself becoming the wife to her one sided crush Sehun. But will it last with Cho Hee still in the picture and Sehun's attitude indifferent to her? What about an appearance of a knight in shining armour that threatens Sehun's place in Hye Su's heart?

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Kim Hye Su
- 21
- The youngest Kim
- 4 older bothers and 1 older stepsister
- Beautiful
- Spoiled by her father and brothers
- Kind and caring to others
- Blunt to those she dislikes and Cho Hee
- Childhood friends with Oh Sehun

Oh Sehun
- 22
- The only heir to the Oh family
- Handsome
- Dating Cho Hee
- Disapproves of Hye Su's attitude
- Childhood friend of Kim Hye Su

Yoon Cho Hee
- 22
- Stepchild in the Kim family
- 3 older stepbrothers, 1 same age stepbrother and 1 younger stepsister
- Pretty
- Shy and meek
- Wants to be close with Hye Su
- Dating Sehun

Park Chanyeol
- 24
- The youngest Park
- 2 older sisters, Park Bom and Park Sandara
- Handsome, tall and funny
- Instant attraction to Hye Su
- Business partners with the Kim's

Kim Min Seok - 26, the oldest Kim
Kim Joon Myeong - 25, the second oldest Kim
Kim Jong Dae - 24, the third oldest Kim
Kim Jong In - 22, the youngest male Kim, best friends with Sehun and the closest to Hye Su

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Hello all,
thank you for taking time to read my little authors note, I would first like to welcome you to this new fanfic. So a little background about it, it's not going to be long max maybe 12 chapters or less. 

I know a lot of you may be from "Maybe there won't be a next time" and is cursing me out loud for not updating that but starting this new fic, erm I'm sorry I'll update both fanfics simultaneously.

Please note:

1) I don't own EXO just the OC's and the storyline

2) These aren't real facts about exo especially not their age and family relations

3) Please do not copy and plagarize my work, or I will hunt you down

4) I'm so sorry if there is a similar story line out there, I had no intentions of copying it

5) I cannot guarantee a happy ending because this is a sad and angsty fic, alternative endngs are up for discussions and votes

6) Please be patient with me and when I update

7) please give this fanfic a lot of love

loving you always my lovelies

remember READ, ENJOY, COMMENT, SUBSCRIBE, UPVOTE

geekinthepinkglasses

p.s do go and check my other fanfics too and give them love

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shahirah2 #1
Chapter 13: It's okay just take your time but be sure to comeback whenever you're ready.
KAIDEUX
#2
Chapter 13: Awww, take your time in updating. I hope you get to feeling well. <3
KAIDEUX
#3
Chapter 12: Yes yes yes! Go Hye Su!! <3 YAS HyeChan
KAIDEUX
#4
Chapter 9: I'm crying. Like why did you do this ;-; awww. Feels. Sorry, I'm weak hearted
KAIDEUX
#5
Chapter 8: I can't breathe TwT ASDFGHJKL can't wven. I think I know how this will end now /: meh! But this fanfic makes my heart beat xD
KAIDEUX
#6
Chapter 1: This chapter upsets me xDD wow. I'm falling in love <3
kpopluver3
#7
Chapter 13: I hope u feel better soon
lovegirl098
#8
Chapter 13: For someone to say that your A/N is a sob story is cruel. It's what you have gone through and is what you are currently fighting against. I admire the strength and courage that you have and I truly hope for you to recover quickly and happily. I also really appreciate the honestly that you are giving us subscribers. It's obviously hard to tall about personal information like that. I hope you get well soon (doesnt seem like the right phrase to use actually...) . People at AFF will be cheering you on. I hope you (and Hae Su) start to have brighter and more joyous days. Btw, Chansu shipper here! Lol! Honestly, I'm starting to hate almost everyone in the story....but Hae su did do some wrong things too....But she doesn't deserve the treatment that she's getting. I hope Chanyeol and Hae Su stay happily together forever and everyone else suffers....sounds mean though...lol.
ikhazulaikha #9
Chapter 12: author when will you update this story?