Man in the Portrait

Description

Chanyeol only had 24 hours when he was given a chance. Baekhyun wanted forever when everything was too late.

Foreword

"Interesting."

A husky voice was heard. Chanyeol blanched. He was scared to death because he didn’t recognize that voice. The only voices he was familiar with were: Mr. Byun and his wife's. And Baekhyun's too. Their voices were friendly and kind but this one...it had a dangerous vibe.

W-Who are you?

“This is my first time seeing a portrait crying. Like really, you’re indeed a special one. I’ve never seen anything like this though.”

Who are you?!

“Ah, don’t be afraid, Chanyeol. I’m here to help you.” The voice then chuckled in happiness, leaving Chanyeol to be more than afraid. “I can help you to become a human.

Y-You can hear me? How do you know my name?

“That’s quite a long story to be told. But let’s just assume that I am actually an angel sent from a place between heaven and hell,” said the voice. “And I know you need my help.”

 



Author's Note:

This story is written based on a prompt I found in this tumblr.

The actual prompt is:

"What would you do when you only have 24 hours left to live in this world?"

And then I suddenly thought about Chanbaek. :'> Although Kaisoo is also perfect for this, but still Chanbaek deserves more since I only wrote two fics of them OTL

And thank you so much to anyone who had subscribed earlier to this story even though I haven't posted the story yet. :'> I just love everyone of you and it makes me even happier to know that there's still someone who would want to read my piece of writings. Do support me in whatever story I write and tell me if I'm lacking somewhere since I need an improvement too.

Disclaimer: I own nothing herein but the plot.

CREDITS;

Poster and chapter banner by:

lynnryan from BAEKYEOL HEAVEN

yifannie
[Man in the Portrait] Final chapter is updated! Thanks for all your support and happy reading! ;_;

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Chanbaek641 #1
Chapter 3: omg!! why did i not find this earlier!
minnssi
#2
Chapter 4: this was so heart breaking :( i really loved reading this so thank you so much for writing this. this was a rollercoaster of emotions. the ending was inevitable. i just hoped there could have been some way to make chanyeol happy. chanyeol doesn't deserve this. i'm so sad this broke my heart hsjdhs chanyeol deserved better. he deserved sunshine and rainbows not this TT :( the ending was really inevitable but really, i just hope Tao or Lay or anyone could have done something to save chanyeol. also, kai was the one who was threatening mr. byun, right? this made me so sad. i can't believe i'm only reading this now. anyway, thank you so much for writing such a beautiful fic. i love your writing style and the flow of the story. thank you thank you thank you ♡ :(
banuu_pa #3
Chapter 4: Wuoh this story is so awesome really?? i cried a lot, the way you worded things and explained situations and feelings, i felt as if i was watching a movie instead of reading srsly awesome!!!

The only thing that's kinda confusing me right now is... like.. where is the connection between the prologue and the rest of the story? I don't quite understand it but i'm so curious idek if you're still active.. i just hope to get an answer, this ff is just so awesome it would be a shame not understanding everything written in the story..

Well, regardless, i hope you have an awesome day ❤
shimyeol
#4
this is so sad and beautiful (ಥ◡ಥ)
Phaenein
#5
Chapter 4: Hi author-nim! ヾ(≧▽≦*)

I really like your concept/idea here! I really enjoyed reading it! ٩(๑~▽~๑)۶

But can I just point out that I was a little confused with the prologue.. I thought it was Chanyeol.. But good thing you pointed out who it is in the end. And then there's these "sentences" or "lines" that I don't quite understand, I'm guessing they're typos. Let's just say that there are parts that needed more clarification. BUT! Over all, it's a great story! It made me cry! The feels! (╥╯﹏╰╥)ง

Cheers to more great stories author-nim! ~\(≧▽≦)/~
blackwinged
#6
I don't like angst as a genre (and I don't like sad endings), it's just not my thing, but this story is too beautiful to not read again and again *-*
especially the description of chanyeol as a painting had me breathless, I always have it tucked away in the back of my head that one day when I feel ready I'll paint him according to your description^^
(I don't have the skill or time as of now but ONE DAY I will ;))
thanks for this beautiful piece of art
viettsbrry
#7
I cried and i love the plots . Its something new and i love it. I was a bit blur at the prologue but since i asked you so then i understand. But i really really love the plots. I means its beautifulllll. I love the way you describe the scenes so i can imagined it. The parts you describe about how chanyeol feels when he saw yifan. I can feel the heart wrenching parts. So its entirely beautiful okay


-maz

Just ignore the weird username btw
exobaeksoo
#8
evil cackles i hate angst but i'm here for you babe ;;;;;
silvercharm_ #9
Chapter 4: This was so so s o beautiful but all the whole heart wrenching ;_______; the characters were really well written and i loved the background to this story as well huhuuhu. Honestly I just can't omg /cries

Anyways, well done syue! my heart is broken :-'))
HappyyyVirus #10
Chapter 4: IM CRYING I CANT TAKE THIS