Waltz With Me

Description

Yifan and Yixing are the perfect couple until Luhan comes into their perfect picture. (Sequel to Maria)

 

Foreword

This is a quick one shot inspired by the song "Waltz with me" by Chihiro Onitsuka. The lyrics to this song is just splendidly sad. This is the sequel to my other story "Maria," so please read that one first before reading this one. Originally, I did planned to write this story out as two parts, one on Luhan's POV and the other on Yixing's POV. I'm sorry if this is not what you guys were expecting :(

 

READ THE PREQUEL "MARIA"

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/789864/maria-angst-drama-exo-kray-krishan-krislu-fanxing

W a r n i n g :

Not much but there is involved but it's not really mature so I won't marked this as mature. There is boyxboy romance, slight angst, and cheating.

 

"Don't dance on your own,

because you're afraid to hurt someone

Waltz with me.
Please waltz with me."

 

 

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veIvetdiamond
#1
Chapter 1: That's just...sad.
Yixing was already free, why does Kris have to drag him back into his life if he's just going to leave Yixing in the cold? Just...why?!
But, anyway, you did a really good job, Author-chan!
It's a cliche plot but your choice of words brought out the angst of the plot. Your presentation was beautifully sad. I love it.
Thank you for sharing this fic.
Miorocks #2
Chapter 1: Im so sad, Yixing deserves better than a halfassed marriage. He just wants to be loved and Kris isnt allowing that. Kris couldve continued his life w/ Luhan but no, he had to go and continue stringing poor Yixing along.
LetMeTortureU
#3
Chapter 1: Love is a strange thing.
geron_bacurin #4
Chapter 1: i don't know why i'm reading this again when i hated it the first time..... maybe i'm just too sleepy and i need something to pump up my adrenaline to wake me up... and feeling great amount of anger while reading this again is definitely one of the things that can get me an adrenaline rush...
minatsuki
#5
Chapter 1: i dont why i am reading an exo fanfic when i didnt even know who is who you r just awesome made me read all your stories
lululara
#6
Chapter 1: The saddest part is that it's an open-ended ending AND I AM TORN HUHUHUHUHU
Congratulations for making me cry T.T (I usually consider a fic as extremely good if it makes me cry)
Also, I'm torn between wanting (even tho you said you're not gonna make another one hehe) and not wanting another sequel because I'm going crazy for the true ending whether of not wufan chooses luhan or yixing. But I also don't want to know because I am absolutely head-over-heels for fanxing, it would destroy me if he chose luhan. But I love both ships so much T.T
THE STRUGGLE IS VERY MUCH REAL
GOOD JOB AUTHOR-NIM!!!!!!!
Galaxy_FanHan007
#7
Chapter 1: I hate you author-nim I'm crying so hard oh my luhan T^T
I want krishan a lot!!!
Minwoo_LS
#8
Chapter 1: So... did Kris go there to accept or reject Luhan? I get that this is an open ending, but I can't help but wonder about that part even though poen endings don't usually get to me, this one is really getting to me!
asian-grafitti
#9
Chapter 1: wow~ O_O
-xblackpearl
#10
♡♡♡♡♡
I CRIED.