Chapter 4: 2/2 spoiler lmao but it's super interesting omf they really are gonna live forever????? Thats amazing theyre all gonna live happily together and go on exciting adventures IM SCREAMING GO DEATHS ANGEL CREW YOURE THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!
LMAO IM SO SORRY FOR THIS COMMENT im just really excited i really liked this story
Plus omfg... ah i lowkey shipped chanhun here even though i knew for a fact they were just best friends. Ahhhhh chanyeol is my best friend goals please give me a best friend like him. BUT I LOVE CHANSOO OMFG THAT LITTLE BIT AT THE END IM SCREAMING THATS GREAT WONDERFUL AMAZING AAAAAA
omg i lost it again ahahhahaha enough this comment is too long alreay hahahahah thank youuuuuuu for writing and sharing such a gem of a fic~ runs away bYE
Chapter 4: Omg i cant believe this what a great fic for some reason this is my first time reading a pirate!au in exo ficdom i wonder where this has been all my life exo as a crew on a ship and on adventures and conquests and tHEIR FRIENDSHIP AND BROTHERHOOD AND WHAT A GREAT FAMILY I UNDERSTAND WHY SEHUN WOULD NEVER TRADE THIS FOR ANYTHING
I love sehun's background i mean i feel bad about his brother and all his nightmares i just wanted to protect him he's my bABY HE DOESNT DESERVE THIS but that just contributes so much to his character like????? Not even kidding. Plus im always more drawn to characters that have vulnerabilities than none so he really is a great main chara in this omf im not making sense but i swear i love everything about him ugh god
I lOVE THEIR DEVELOPMENT, HIS AND MINSEOK'S???? OH GOD WOW XIUHUN WINS it felt so natural???? Sehun's initial feelings of jealousy and denial that he could be falling for minseok and minseok's care and concern for sehun???? Like????? gotta sAY THOUGH THAT DRUNK KISS WAS MY FAVORITE LMAO YEOL AND HIS IDEAS. BUT REALLY THAT KISS WAS JUST MY FAVE. AND THAT KISS WHEN MINSEOK CHANGED HIS BANDAGES OH MY GOD I LOVED THE ACHE IN MY HEART IT WAS SO IMMEDIATE WHEN THEY WERE AVOIDING EACH OTHER BECAUSE DAMN TEYVE GOTTEN SO CLOSE AND COMFORTABLE WITH EACH OTHER ONLY TO BE AVOIDING GLANCES BECAUSE OF WHAT HAPPENED AND IT TURNS OUT MINSEOK JUST WANTED SEHUN TO REALLY TELL HIM WHEN HES SOBER LIKE????? THAT KISS WAS SO CHASTE AND GENTLE AND TTTTTTTTT
i loved the rest of the kisses ofc. 1/2
Chapter 4: You know for a moment I was scared that there wasn't going to be a fountain of youth. That it was truly all a myth. But then it wasn't and my heart was beating when they fought the ghost pirates and I was smiling all the way through. My eyes were practically glued to my phone as I read all the way to the end.
The last line satisfied me so much. I really loved this. Thank you for writing the small tale~
Chapter 4: I love it. I love it so much. I have no comments no questions nothing to tell you except this is a really really really good story. It's so good I can't find any flaw. I love the intimacy between Minseok and Sehun. I love the tales, the fights, everything. It was all so real and believable.
This is what I called an effective strategic planning. You go and pat yourself on the back for a job, a story well done.
Chapter 4: This is beautiful, seriously, I loved it, the conflict was real and the writing was amazing! I hope you will write more fics like this in the future, author-nim! I love it I love it I love it sarang sarang sarang wo ai zhe ge gu shi!!! I love it
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