Guilty Of Love

Description

On the top of the list of things Park MinJee never expected doing, was being involved in a strange living condition with her client. If it had been a few weeks ago, she would have been scared for her mental conscience, but circumstances were different now. In order to win the case, MinJee must befriend Lee Donghae and win his trust. Only then, can she learn the true story behind the curtains of the crime scene. This case may seem simple enough, but with the addition of ex-boyfriends, awkward mishappenings, and unwanted feelings, MinJee is in for much more than she ever expected.

Foreword

Intro

So...to all my subscribers from other stories or "To Steal His Heart" who may bother themselves with reading this, thank you. And to all future new subscribers and/or current new subscribers, thank you too. If you are reading "To Steal His Heart", rest assured that I will complete that one first. Therefore, I'm not sure when I'll get to this. I will surely post a 1st chapter soon enough because I hate leaving only a foreword done.

Anyway...this is going to be my...4th fic? Yes, I'm aware that two are on hiatus and unfinished so far. Anyway, this is my 2nd SuJu fic. I know I'm not the best writer, so please don't go too harsh on me. I do like criticism as long as it's not bashing...I mean, if you want to bash me, go right ahead, but everyone has feelings. Thsoe who bash others are either oblicious to obvious feelings, or inhumanly cruel.

Well, enough of that. I do hope you all enjoy this story. The concept is one I like, although I've worried countless times whether its cliche. Of course it has a catch, but still...that whole boy/girl living situation thing has been overdone. Hopefully this won't end up being one too many times.

In any case, I do hope you'll enjoy


She shot him an incredulous look. She'd already tried the serious lawyer role; she played the intimidation card; and she tried to reassure him. What more did he want? How could she convince him? She turned to meet the teary eyes of her client that threatened to fall. 
 
"Hey, hey. No tears, okay? You've got nothing to worry about as long as you tell me what happened." 
 
"But I can't tell you, noona. I can't tell anyone, so...can you pretend that I really did steal it?" 
 
"No." MinJee replied steadily. She massaged her temples, taking in the information. She could feel a slight migraine come on when she thought about how she would solve the case. She needed this case to save her from financial ruin. That much had become evident. She couldn't keep relying on her parent's money. 
 
MinJee contemplated the many ways she could convince Lee Donghae. Unfortunately, this would be the hardest part. Despite his naive appearance, it seemed as though he were hiding something, and refused to tell her.  
 
Suddenly, the solutions to her problems hit her like a ton of bricks. If Lee Donghae wouldn't tell her only because he didn't trust her, then if she earned his trust, he'd definitely tell her, right? But...how would she earn a stranger's trust that quickly? She'd never see him outside of the detention center, right? 
 
MinJee turned to face Donghae with a knowing smile. She folded her hands out in front of her, and glanced over at him. 
 
"Do you have a place to stay?" 
 
He shot her a confused look in response, followed by a blank stare. 
 
"But the security guard said that I have to stay in one of the cells." Donghae responded with confusion. 
 
"I have my connections." A slight smirk fell upon her lips, as she reached out to pull him up. "Well? Why don't we get out of here?" 
 
He stared up at her with wide eyes for just a second, before sheepishly directing his attention to the floor. 
 
"B-but...I have no where to go." 
 
She glanced up at him with a grin. 
 
"Well, now you do. But, I do have some conditions..." Donghae slowly directed his hesitant bewildered attention to the girl. 
 
"Lee Donghae, I swear that one day, I will make you tell me the truth." 

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XxSUJUxX
#1
New reader -w-
I hope you update soon, even though it's been forever xD
You were in the CYW Challenge? :D I was your judge!
purplekpop
#2
update here too lady :D
ShiroiParadise
#3
@Ami_SuJuElf - I did? Hmm...how so? Ah! Wow, you're really good at guessing. It's something like that. Something close, but not exactly :) Hahahahaha. But that's the suspense of it all, ne?
ShiroiParadise
#4
@Unmei474 - Yes. Knowing Heechul, this has now become a thousand times harder, especially since his testimony is going to be good. <br />
Hehehehe. I think they'll be good friends from a few points on, or at least closer :) I was debating so long on how to make them friends...<br />
Alright. Thank you :) And I look forward to that update too<br />
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@chickenonew - Yeah. It's a little soon for that, as I want them to becoem friends first :)<br />
Hahahahaha. It's going to get hard, having both Kyuhyun and Heechul pitted against him. Donghae is just adorable >.<<br />
Thanks!~ I'll try to update ASAP, although I doubt it'll be some time this week >.<<br />
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@kkhihi - Hahahaha. Yes I am >:) That's because that's the way Donghae is :) Adorable and hot at the same time
Ami_SuJuElf
#5
God!! You just fooled me!!!<br />
Seriously I thought in the story Donghae was like 17 ~ 19 years old!!<br />
Don't blame me for that, u made him look like his is!!<br />
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and freak! Heechul is the witness? Donghae won't stand a chance! I hope Min Jee will comes out with solution. I believe that someone/something has forced Donghae to did the crime! and yeah, it's killing me to not know the real story...><
kkhihi
#6
OH GOSH! thinking about y kyu and BAM appear donghae shirtless..woman! are u trying to kill me!!! u no wat i love..how u portray donghae as so innocent looking, cute, but then also freakin HOT!!!
chickenonew
#7
ACKJDBNCFIUWFNHC, oh how i wish that him questioning her relationship status was because he was hitting on her XD<br />
BUT, i think its too soon for that >:D<br />
Damn Kyuhyun, he's so cute but he's a jerk in this story! lol.<br />
and Heechul...well, he's always the sharp tongued one XD<br />
poor MinJee..atleast you have Donghae to cheer you up!<br />
AND DONGHAE, ACKSJCDUSNHDF, HE'S SO CUTE. OMG.<br />
please try and update whenever you can~<br />
im sure we are all patient enough, so take your time! :DD
Unmei474
#8
Gah! Heechul... Hmmm... interesting development. Very very. lol<br />
Bahaha, her reaction was soooo great! I thought it was the funnies thing! MinJee, buahahahaha! GREAT! Okay, okay, enough of that.<br />
He already likes her. Na na na nanana~!! Well, from what I think hehe.<br />
Short but sweet, but I really want to know what he's going to show her! Take your time on your updates. I'm sure most of us gets it anyways, being busy and all. I will try updating I Can Only Love You soon too... ;)
ShiroiParadise
#9
@TiaraL - Aww...thanks ^.^ I'm glad you like it. I will! ^.^