Chapter 1: you, young miss, are stepping up your game. this is absolutely brilliant. i don't even care about the pairing anymore. [im not fond of yulti btw] and to write in second pov in such way! can i just say, i am now your fan.
Chapter 1: AFF doesn't do justice to good writers, mostly because the readers are not fluent or too young to understand the content of the story. I have to admit that I'm also not fluent, but know enough english to appreciate good writings when I come to read one. I think one of them is this one right here.
Although it's only a drabble, and I prefer longer fics.
Please keep on writing, don't get discouraged if you don't get many comments, because believe me, you're doing good.
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