Chapter 1: Oh god! Another one of your masterpiece! A different writing style i should say, but still you blew me away! I love how you use imagery in this one, and those side notes just add that flavor to it! I got confused at the last paragraph tho haha maybe it's just me but still, another word ! one shot specialist authornim teach me your ways, please!!!

Chapter 1: I must say, I don't regret clicking on your blog. Not one bit.

I love the first sentence. Love it. The story too, though a bit abstract is constructed beautifully.

Your choice of characters are interesting. Personally, I'd say Chaerin's personality would fit Dara's character in this story more. Chaerin seems more dynamic and Dara, more subdued to me. But that aside, what a wonderful story.