❝Only that day did I learn the pungent smell of blood, diversities of the human flesh, and the morbidity of death. The bus we rode skidded into a ravine – it was the turning point in my life and the beginning of everything.
When I was closed to surrendering, she reached for my hand and told me, "we'll survive this together."
2014, August 23: Forty-four people were killed in the country's deadliest road accident near Meridian Highlands...
❝There were three survivors, and I was one of them.❞
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Date: 29 July
Reviewer: YiFanForever
This plot was unlike anything I've ever read before. The concept that you used was interesting.
Date: 03 August
Reviewer: jaebal
The plot that you used is unique, the sudden twist in the end gave me a jolt.
Date: 09 August
Reviewer: fefedove
Your descriptions of how Hyuna felt were very well-written and you used good description words. Overall, this was a really interesting story and I'm glad I read it.
Reviewer: yeolwho05
I'm not a big fan of horror stories, but you made my life better by reading yours.
AUTHOR'S NOTES
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Hello! Thank you so much for your support and encouragement.
Chapter 2: I love this so much man
From start to end everything was making me think, think, t h i n k and uh I like horror <3 This was terrifying in the sense that the fantasies are conquered by realizations and that can be what scares people the most so yeah, job well done to you for this!
I'd imagine this to be something worth to be a movie because it should definitely get the attention by sight the second it will play. My imagination is r o l l i n g.
I really love this.
Chapter 2: Goddamn! Damnnnnnnn oh my god! It's absolutely fantastic... How can you write such a brilliant story line author? I can't believe it was a oneshoot, the best oneshoot I ever read«3333333 I'm sure it will be amazing to make it become book... I don't know the plot at first, I mean it just an ordinary life of a girl who hate her own life and she had an amazing friend who are fulfill each other life with happiness that's it. (Chemistry between eunjung and hyuna is truly beautiful, I wish I had a friendship like them:") But every sentence of the story make me more and more curious about the conflicts and tadaaaa......... I'm not expecting at all that their story is ugh complicated:" unbelieveble. btw where is luhannn? Who is inside eunjung body too? The story said that there is 3 survivors of the accident, if luhan is in eunjung body how can he become an evil? He have his own body and his own life despite eunjung is have nothing. And if luhan is still trapped, how can he not meet with hyuna and eunjung all the time they are there? Beside luhan is the main cast too if hyuna and a soul in eunjung body already free from that damn world how about luhannn?. It just killing me softly!!!!! I'm curious author oh god:"""" if you plan to make a sequel tell us okayyy, or plan to make another greattt story just tell me«3 there always a time to read story who have a mind blowing like yours.... Fightingggg authorrr!!! Keep working on ur fantastic world!!
One word : Mind-Blowing. This kind of story that was always captivated my attention. Even though it had dark theme in it well not exactly that dark but somehow it pulled you into deep dark hole and made you feel loosely and experiencing a mixture of emotions. I'm usually not a fan of angst or drama story but when it had a very good plot, I wouldn't stop reading it until I reached the ending. That showed how interesting the narration was. In spite of I was confused at the beginning, I enjoyed scanning through it. It also have a great interpretation in this narrative which I loved it. As well as the friendship chemistry between Hyuna and Eunjung was beautiful that showed us how friends are very supportive and could give the same warmth as our family and had a huge impact in our life which also encourage us to be strong. It was a beautiful friendship that hardly to be found in this life lol. At first, I mistaken them as lovers XD I don't even know why but whatever I still love the story. (^3^) Anyway, excellent work author-nim. (^.^)b
Chapter 2: dayuuumm~ this is some serious horror you got.. but this story reminds me of insidious.. i think luhan's in eunjung's body.. anyway, i hope you can continue this story ^^
Chapter 2: oh god, i cant believe i just did this O.o
at first when i look at the story, i was like 'gosh, so long.. might skip reading at certain spot then come back later' but well, that didn't happen, your writing keeps me intrigued until the end, probably this was the longest oneshot i've ever read in aff xD, not in bad way, ofc
at first a thought this story will be angst without no supernatural stuff in it, because of those layout, guess i need to erase this bad habit of mine for ignoring the tag =="
also when i read about this 'other world' and the real world the body is still in coma, it reminded me a bit of insidious too, but the story got a cool concept in it, keep up the good work!
i got an idea bout who is inside eunjung's body, was it the monster who wants hyuna's body before? :D
i'm curious too what role Luhan will play in the sequel,
and anyway, thanks for writing such a beautiful story!
Chapter 2: OMG! This story is indeed a great one! Thanks to those someone who happens to advertise this story on my wall!
Your writing is also something that I have to praise on! It's like we as the reader is also being dragged into the story and feels the way Song Hyuna had felt about; believing the "trapped" world as a real life and then feels the conflict about which is real and which is not. Not all author of a horror story could make their readers feels exactly like what's the main character feels; like we're directly experiencing this whole story yet you did!
However, I feels like this story is yet to be marked as complete as there's still some mystery that needs to unfold.
Just like what we'd been told, there's six survivors but at the end the news only mentioned three. Where's the other three then?
Then, why would Luhan took Eunjung's body when he has his own?
Over all, among the six survivors, why only Hyuna, Eunjung, and Luhan who'd been trapped in those world? I think, the three of them had connected to each other before the accidents happens which caused them to meet in the trapped world.
Besides, back then in the stair where Luhan shift his attention towards Eunjung whom distracted his 'ritual' on took over Hyuna's body, in that brief moment, it seems like Hyuna recognized Luhan but she just couldn't out a finger on it.
Oh! And don't forget that Eunjung claimed Luhan as a soulless creature;a monster. Then if he is a monster, how could he listed as one of the six survivors? If Luhan is a monster, he should've only exist in those trapped world, not in real life as well.
That's why I believed that this story isn't over yet.
There should be a continuation of this story, right author-nim?
It's still a lot of secrets and question that we haven't find the answer yet.
Also, Hyuna still has a mission that she's to complete; find Kris.
So author-nim, I'm waiting for the sequel of this story! PS: you're amazing! ^^
Chapter 2: Wow! That was really good!
It kind of reminded me of insidious a little.
One of the best one-shots that i have ever read in this website! Really good! :)
hoel~!!!!wrong timing to read this in the middle of nightTT.TT
now im scared hahahaTT.TT
but thata was awesome~
i thought hyuna and eunjung were in love or somethingXD
it confused me so much at first but it hit me when eunjung said they are actually in coma and i was like "ah,now i get it!' and it was like half the story already LOL~
it would be awesome if its a full length stories than one shot and actually i do feel like its kind of unfinished?i want to know about that new eunjung and luhan-ssi...i was like damn what happen to him?
are you planning on doing the sequel?im not pressuring you but id be more than happy if you do..
btw awesome shot once again..i love everything aobut it..the line story, time slots, especially where i got confused very much at the beginning hahaXD
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