Alternate Ending?

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I will give you a little to think about guys. I think a line or two can change the ending. I will try to make you confused. I have already ended the story completely in the previous chapter because it's a one shot, but I just wanted to experiment. Below is an alternate ending, only read if your curiosity overtook the ending:

 

 

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“Now you know that I love you. Now you know that I am in love with you.” Said Minho. “Do you know what’s going to happen next?”

Sulli shook her head.

“I’m going to make you fall in love with me…again.” Said Minho. “I don’t care if you haven’t remembered everything. I don’t care if you only remember them tomorrow or never. But one thing is for sure, I will pursue you Sulli. I will make your heart beat for me again. And when it does, I won’t let it break a single crack ever again. I will never make the same mistake of losing you.”

Sulli bit her lip as her eyes become blurry with tears.

“You… are really a great doctor.” Said Sulli. “Because you just healed my heart.”

Minho stood up and pulled Sulli into a tight embrace.

“Let’s make new memories together Sulli. For whatever had faded, we will replace them with clear new ones. This is only the beginning.” Said Minho.

Sulli nodded.

The truth is… in her heart, her love for Minho has never ever faded. And it never will.

“About the cake.” Said Sulli.

“Yeah?”

“You were torturing me earlier.” Said Sulli.

Minho grinned.

“You know how I hate to eat cakes and yet you let me continue eating.” Said Sulli.

“That’s my simple revenge.” Said Minho. “For making me wait for you this long.”

Sulli pouted.

“I will never let you eat cakes again. But I will surely treasure the one you baked for me.” Said Minho. “From now on, anything about  you, I will treasure them, Sulli.”

Sulli smiled.

“Happy Birthday.”

Minho bit his lip as he held Sulli tighter.

 

His birthday is not in another 3 months...

 

 

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***I don't think it's much of a difference. hahaha!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Megumi_Watanabe
#1
Just rereading authornim.
zangsia1 #2
Chapter 2: I guess the possibilities are endless
zangsia1 #3
Chapter 2: Just rereading authornim. Love it still
zangsia1 #4
Chapter 2: makes a change in perspecthve
thanks
varhalaela #5
Chapter 1: wahhhh......misul jang ..romantis bgt..kkkk...momentny dapet bft..wah..ternyata oneshoot kirain panjang ceritanya.. hehe..
ChoiChinLi
#6
Chapter 1: Minhoney oppa jjang!
Sulli, I love you, dear... :*
But, what happened to Sulli's knee these days? I'm worried... Huhuhu

This is really a wonderful story...
Great job, Authornim...
Thanks a lot! :)
MeLot_24 #7
Chapter 2: Authornim can you answer this?? " his birthday is not in another 3 months " ???
farahdayang
#8
Chapter 2: That was so twisted! It does make a huge difference hahahahahah love the short story! Almost made me in tears ;_;
zeemino
#9
Chapter 1: im crying so hard the story is soooooo beautiful ㅜㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅜㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅜ
zangsia1 #10
Chapter 2: i think there is... it meant what sulli remembers is not entirely what really transpired... thanks for t he one shot authornim