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TITLE: Only Tears
MOOD: Romance, Angst
REVIEWER: DanielArmandLee
REVIEWED FOR: Taodaypanda

MOOD AND THEMES (3/10)

Time and again, this is the part that hurts the most. The mood and theme. You provided a romance plus angst theme. Your title is taken from an Infinite song that I do love very much. In fact, if I hadn't heard this song, I wouldn’t have been an Inspirit at all. I know by heart the story of that song and even if I didn't, I still would have expected something less saturated and more dark for a piece of work with that theme and title. The colors are romcomdiculous. We have cyan, pink, purple; all sweet and vibrant . Then we have a lime (?) green band with pale yellow text. And then we have all the other colors that are their clothes.

 

Why?

 

Why all these colors? It makes no absoinlutely no sense in this theme. I'm not saying that these colors can not be used in angst. They can be. But definitely not in this vibrance and absolutely not all at the same time. It looks too happy.

 

COLOR HARMONY (5/10)

 

Since the colors don't make sense in the romance+angst theme, I am going to evaluate your color harmony in the romcom  perspective. It's still not good even as for a romcom color harmony. Why? Because it still has way too many colors. You have three colors in your background and all your characters are wearing solid colors too that they are accounted for in your main color harmony. So we have a glaring cyan, Barbie pink, Justin Bieber purple, a pretty shade of pale yellow, true blue ad Sungjong's red shoes. I didn't count Sungyeol's clothes since they are not bright and therefore do not command attention. We have about six colors competing for your eye's attention. The only time that works is in a rainbow or a skittles candy wrapper.

 

What you could have done to save this poster if you wanted to keep the three solid color backgrounds is to replace them with colors that are readily available in your palette: the boys' clothes. So maybe instead of purple, cyan and pink, you could have gone for blue, yellow and red. So I lazily threw it in ps and replaced the color and this is roughly what it looks like if you replaced the colors.

 

 

See how simply by reducing your palette, the entire thing seems more together and less strawberry fields forever? Just a bit more fixing on the general coloring and sharpness and it could work…

 

But then again, remember that I am saying all this in romcom perspective. If you were really going for angst, going for a flag background isn't the smartest idea.

 

 

STOCK USES (20/25)

It is a very minimalist poster and as such, I wouldn't expect so much stock aside from the characters and hopefully a background. But since we have no other stock aside from the characters, we shall focus on that.

 

I am giving you a high grade for this because the photos you used are good. I assume that they are pre-cut because they do not have anything in common aside from that I have seen precut photos of these exact imag

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AXISfling
#1
Hello darl! I'm from J F Y . It's a graphic shop. Would you be interested to be part of our affies?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/637089
Bbfairline
#2
Chapter 2: Username: Bbfairline
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/406221
Your Request: Poster
Story Title: Arranged With You ( First Love) The first love word make it small without the bracket
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/566872/arranged-with-you-arrangedmarriage-you-school-love-luhan
Story Summary: She love him but he changes because of him and she decide to forget him,Her "First Love" but she been forced marry to him.What happen?
Genre/Mood: Romance and Schoollove
Rated/Not: Not Rated
Character You Want to Put in Poster: EXO,Luhan and Byun Jiyoung. (Can you chose the picture because I don't know how to chose a specific picture)
Specific: Quates : You are my FIRST LOVE , can you be my LAST LOVE?
Designer You Pick: Katakatica
Anything Else: Nothing ~ Just do your best. ^^
Password:hamsterleader
coldcoffee
#4
Chapter 2: GRAPHIC REQUEST

Username: coldcoffee
Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/690634
Your Request: poster
Story Title: Good Luck
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/782655
Story Summary: Lu Han had broken up with Mina leaving her with only 'good luck' words. The words that Mina hates so much. On the other hand, Mina's best friend, Minseok, tried his best to make Mina and Lu Han back together again as Mina suffered from heart disease and predicted to not live for long.
Genre/Mood: angst, romance,
Rated/Not: not
Character You Want to Put in Poster: luhan, xiumin, mina (OC), and hyejin (OC) (about the photos its up to you, really)
Specific: quote: 'good luck to you, baby, good luck to you...' -about the color can you make it dark/black with red/pink color as the ornaments such as for words, etc (but its up to you... kk)
Designer You Pick: DanielArmandLee
Anything Else: -
Password: hamsterleader

thankyou very much ^^
Taodaypanda
#5
Chapter 27: Thank you very much for the review. I'll work harder in the future.
-caas-
#6
Hi. I'm starting a shops list and I want to add your shop/gallery/list/contest/roleplay :
Read the rules, complete this form , put it in the comments box for this link and you will be on the list.

Author's name:
Author's link:
Co-authors:
Created:
Status:
Banner's link:
Shop's Title:
Shop's link:
Shop genre:
Description:
Author's Note:
Info you want to add:
Services/Packs/posters/trailers exp:

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/802501/dream-city-shops-list-graphic-poster-trailer-advertise-shop-layouts-reviewer
MidnightNightingale #7
Chapter 2: GRAPHIC REQUEST FORM
Username: MidnightNightingale
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/127480
Your Request: Poster and Background
Story Title: Beyond the Magic Mirror
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/722576/beyond-the-magic-mirror-friendship-romance-exo-luhan-sehun-hunhan-slightangst
Story Summary: Sehun meets a boy who befriends him and cares for him. He grows feelings for said boy and their friendship deepens but he couldn't help but still feel melancholic over the fact that they can't be together... because they were on different sides of the mirror.
Genre/Mood: Slight angst, drama, friendship, romance
Rated/Not:
Character You Want to Put in Poster: (name and picture link, only HQ image please. We may change the picture if necessary, but we will try not to)
Specific: I want it to have a sad atmosphere with Sehun looking through a mirror and trying to reach out to Luhan, the boy on the other side. Quotes: "I wish you were standing right next to me."
Designer You Pick: DanielArmandLee
Anything Else: I leave the designer to do her thing! I have trust and faith that she can make it daebak! xD Thank you~!
Password: hamsterleader
sekaii
#8
Graphic Review Form
Username: sekaii
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/223353
Graphic Tittle: Never Let Go
Graphic Link: http://i.imgur.com/WFpatyu.png
Genre/Mood: light angst
Experience: Gimp and 1 month
Focus On: everything, but mainly theme.
Strictness Level: Harsh. I want to know what I can improve on in order to make my posters look better.
Reviewer You Pick: sorarius
Anything Else: I wanted to go from my sharpen effect of making graphics to a softer effect of making posters. I want to know if its a tad blury since I applied some blur to it.
Password: hamsterleader

please and thankyou <3
bottleofdreams
#9
Chapter 2: Username: petrabigail
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/206206
Graphic Tittle: Best Wishes To You
Graphic Link: https://i.minus.com/jX2TyqAr7weof.png
Genre/Mood: some romance angst, tiny bit of fantasy I think?
Experience: Photoshop and a year more or less
Focus On: everything
Strictness Level: honest but not rude
Reviewer You Pick: DanielArmandLee
Anything Else: none. I made this before the previous review, so same mistakes could happen ><
Password: hamsterleader
Thank you before!