[G.R.] petrabigail

§orarius★§hop || Graphic Request & Poster Review Shop || BATCH 2 || CLOSED
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
petrabigail review
pickup shop home    staff information    form & application    rubric    layout credit

TITLE: Hell's Fairy Message
MOOD:Dark, Fantasy
REVIEWER: DanielArmandLee
REVIEWED FOR: petrabigail

MOOD AND THEMES (8.5/10)
While writing this review, I am not connected to the internet and therefore I couldn't check what mood or theme you put so I'm going to make a guess and say that this is in the fantasy genre. Because yeah HELL+FAIRY… if this isn't fantasy then I don't know what the poster is up to. On the first look, it has this gloomy ethereal (why do I keep using this word?)glow going on and if I would put a background music I'd probably pick Evanescence's My Immortal for it. The almost monochromatic colors with a lot of cloud and light leak use produces an overall effect that says "Hey, I'm mysterious and enchanting." very dark fairy tale like. Overall it is pretty consistent with the fantasy fairytale vibe but my main problem is the idea of "Hell's Fairy". When you say the word hell, you think of a place that is hot and full of anguish and torment. That conflicts with the rather serene but foreboding aura that your piece gives. If you say the word hell, I would expect harsh hot color leaks like red or scarlet accents. But all I get are cool colors and very subdued warm undertones (which the regular person wouldn’t even notice). I think it would be more appropriate to call it "Underworld" instead of "Hell"? Because honestly if I will have to picture a fairy from hell, I wouldn’t think of the ghost of a blonde Rowena Ravenclaw. I'd picture a star grade chick with massive , leather clothing and bat wings. So there, all in all. The fantasy fairytale thing is nice but the hell concept is just a few degrees off.

COLOR HARMONY (9.5/10)
I like that you didn’t use too much color on this piece. In fantasy posters, except of course in fantastic magical adventures like Magical Imaginarium of Doctor Parnassus kind of concepts, less is more when it comes to colors. We focus on its dreamlike qualities which is accentuated by blurry, glowing colors that bleed into each other. In your case, since it is a darker concept, the almost monochromatic scheme of things achieves this. I like that the moon and the woman are of the same color which makes it seem that they are made of the same thing. I don't have any problem with the color harmony except that it's too safe. This is a mistake I often commit: making everything too monochromatic even when it is not when we can add something that's a bit more interesting like strengthening the warm undertones since everything else is cold. But again, it is safe. So yeah, almost full points for this. It's not really a mistake anyway. More like we could have gone for amazing. But beautiful is good too. I actually like it.

STOCK USES (20/25)
I give nine points to the woman stock image you used. I love the form of her pose. It is dramatic and dynamic. I can't see much of her face since she is looking at the crow but I guess that is a plus since it adds to the mysterious factor. What I don't like about the woman is that she is just a touch too sharpened especially the edge of the hand leading to the crow. It would be nice if you just blurred it a bit because it distracts from the soft fantasy feel of the poster. If you would compare both her arms, you would see that her left arm with the hand touching (but not holding) the sword has a soft graceful flow. It blends easily into the rest of the poster whereas the right hand is like a knife that jaggedly cuts through it. If you do not want to blur it, maybe you could use the burn tool very lightly at the edges of her arm so that it softly graduates from her alabastrine skin to the dark night sky. I am not sure if the crow is part of the same source image as the woman but I'm pretty sure the sword isn't because she isn't holding it, which is kinda odd. So I give the other renders a four because the sword is just standing there awkwardly like "Okay, go on. Romance your crow. I'm just gonna stand here and pretend gravity isn't a thing. It's not like I'm heavy or anything." I have a feeling though that you got this in a precut/render pack or something and they were already sewn together so it might not be your fault at all but I still find it awkward. For the textures and other stock images , I'll give you a seven. I generally feel that the textures were well blended and masked so there are no visible seems. However the piece overall feels a little too bare. I feel that you could have added a little more. Not too much but just a little more just so that it could balance all the white space at the sides. Another thing that concerns me is the wings of the woman. I have said earlier that I'm not really convinced with the white winged hell fairy so I'll let that pass and just think that she is a fallen angel. However I am not sure of what you want to

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
sorarius
I'm so sorry for updating and doing the requests this late. Many things happened, but I'll try to finish all of request immediately. m(_ _)m

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
AXISfling
#1
Hello darl! I'm from J F Y . It's a graphic shop. Would you be interested to be part of our affies?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/637089
Bbfairline
#2
Chapter 2: Username: Bbfairline
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/406221
Your Request: Poster
Story Title: Arranged With You ( First Love) The first love word make it small without the bracket
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/566872/arranged-with-you-arrangedmarriage-you-school-love-luhan
Story Summary: She love him but he changes because of him and she decide to forget him,Her "First Love" but she been forced marry to him.What happen?
Genre/Mood: Romance and Schoollove
Rated/Not: Not Rated
Character You Want to Put in Poster: EXO,Luhan and Byun Jiyoung. (Can you chose the picture because I don't know how to chose a specific picture)
Specific: Quates : You are my FIRST LOVE , can you be my LAST LOVE?
Designer You Pick: Katakatica
Anything Else: Nothing ~ Just do your best. ^^
Password:hamsterleader
coldcoffee
#4
Chapter 2: GRAPHIC REQUEST

Username: coldcoffee
Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/690634
Your Request: poster
Story Title: Good Luck
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/782655
Story Summary: Lu Han had broken up with Mina leaving her with only 'good luck' words. The words that Mina hates so much. On the other hand, Mina's best friend, Minseok, tried his best to make Mina and Lu Han back together again as Mina suffered from heart disease and predicted to not live for long.
Genre/Mood: angst, romance,
Rated/Not: not
Character You Want to Put in Poster: luhan, xiumin, mina (OC), and hyejin (OC) (about the photos its up to you, really)
Specific: quote: 'good luck to you, baby, good luck to you...' -about the color can you make it dark/black with red/pink color as the ornaments such as for words, etc (but its up to you... kk)
Designer You Pick: DanielArmandLee
Anything Else: -
Password: hamsterleader

thankyou very much ^^
Taodaypanda
#5
Chapter 27: Thank you very much for the review. I'll work harder in the future.
-caas-
#6
Hi. I'm starting a shops list and I want to add your shop/gallery/list/contest/roleplay :
Read the rules, complete this form , put it in the comments box for this link and you will be on the list.

Author's name:
Author's link:
Co-authors:
Created:
Status:
Banner's link:
Shop's Title:
Shop's link:
Shop genre:
Description:
Author's Note:
Info you want to add:
Services/Packs/posters/trailers exp:

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/802501/dream-city-shops-list-graphic-poster-trailer-advertise-shop-layouts-reviewer
MidnightNightingale #7
Chapter 2: GRAPHIC REQUEST FORM
Username: MidnightNightingale
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/127480
Your Request: Poster and Background
Story Title: Beyond the Magic Mirror
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/722576/beyond-the-magic-mirror-friendship-romance-exo-luhan-sehun-hunhan-slightangst
Story Summary: Sehun meets a boy who befriends him and cares for him. He grows feelings for said boy and their friendship deepens but he couldn't help but still feel melancholic over the fact that they can't be together... because they were on different sides of the mirror.
Genre/Mood: Slight angst, drama, friendship, romance
Rated/Not:
Character You Want to Put in Poster: (name and picture link, only HQ image please. We may change the picture if necessary, but we will try not to)
Specific: I want it to have a sad atmosphere with Sehun looking through a mirror and trying to reach out to Luhan, the boy on the other side. Quotes: "I wish you were standing right next to me."
Designer You Pick: DanielArmandLee
Anything Else: I leave the designer to do her thing! I have trust and faith that she can make it daebak! xD Thank you~!
Password: hamsterleader
sekaii
#8
Graphic Review Form
Username: sekaii
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/223353
Graphic Tittle: Never Let Go
Graphic Link: http://i.imgur.com/WFpatyu.png
Genre/Mood: light angst
Experience: Gimp and 1 month
Focus On: everything, but mainly theme.
Strictness Level: Harsh. I want to know what I can improve on in order to make my posters look better.
Reviewer You Pick: sorarius
Anything Else: I wanted to go from my sharpen effect of making graphics to a softer effect of making posters. I want to know if its a tad blury since I applied some blur to it.
Password: hamsterleader

please and thankyou <3
bottleofdreams
#9
Chapter 2: Username: petrabigail
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/206206
Graphic Tittle: Best Wishes To You
Graphic Link: https://i.minus.com/jX2TyqAr7weof.png
Genre/Mood: some romance angst, tiny bit of fantasy I think?
Experience: Photoshop and a year more or less
Focus On: everything
Strictness Level: honest but not rude
Reviewer You Pick: DanielArmandLee
Anything Else: none. I made this before the previous review, so same mistakes could happen ><
Password: hamsterleader
Thank you before!