[G.R.] SistarHolic

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TITLE: Summer Love
MOOD: Romance, Summer Vibe
REVIEWER: DanielArmandLee
REVIEWED FOR: SistarHolic

MOOD AND THEMES (5/10)

 

Nothing quite says romance and summer vibe more than girls wearing midriffs holding ually suggestive props and slathering whipped cream all over. And in case no one has caught on, I'm being sarcastic. I am fifty-fifty about your given theme and the pictures used. Yes, it is very summery with the blue ocean backdrop and scantily clad Bora and Hyorin. But I'm not really sure what is romantic about it unless romance to you means Spring Breakers.

 

The only thing that saves the mood and theme of it is the fun vibe we are getting from their smiling faces and the ocean. That's pretty much it. To be honest, it's more of on the Beach rather than Summer Romance. Although and romance are like cousins, they are the type of cousins who get compared to each other in a harsh way. ", you are such a disgrace to this family. Why can't you be more like your cousin Romance? She graduated from Oxford, last year she found the cure for cancer, and now she's getting engaged with this handsome musical genius. While you, you're out and about spreading your legs like a common hoe." You get my drift. and romance are not mutually inclusive sets. And before anyone raises a feminist brow at me saying that these girls are just y and it is not necessarily themed, kindly get the out of my universe.  You can not even spell y without .  Thank you. And in the same virtue, come on. Both of them are holding phallic objects while puckering their lips and then they are playing with whipped cream. I'm not really a pro in baking  or whatever but I'm pretty sure you're not supposed to spread it all over your thighs unless it's some kink. And if it is your kink, by all means, spread it. But no. Don't tell me this is about romance. Flowers are romantic. Whipped cream is .

 

Also, the pictures of the girls are too warm. Waaay too warm for summer. Which leads to the next segment. Colors

 

COLOR HARMONY (8.5/10)

 

From this point onward, I would assume now that the theme is a y summer so that I won't have to deduct points whenever I see something that doesn’t quite fit in the romance theme.


Theoretically, I like the color palette used. Ocean and sky blue then you have the girls who are mostly wearing shades of pink then black. Loads and loads of warm colors to contrast with the cool blue. But then that's where things went a bit wrong. There is way too much warmth in the pictures of Sistar. Look at their skin. Too much magenta in it. It doesn’t even look like a legit tan. That wouldn’t be too distracting if the girls were not dominating the picture too much. But as it is, the girls are stacked foreground  almost haphazardly and all I could focus on is how warm their colors are. I know that maybe you got these pictures from a source that already played with the color levels but maybe you could have toned them down so that they wouldn't be so painful against the background. Other than the clash with the warm and cool, I'm okay with your color choices.

 

STOCK USES (16/25)

10/15 pts people stock- First of all, you chose good quality pictures. It is good that they are from the same set so their color palette and overall sharpness and quality are similar. However I am deducting points due to the fact that they look like sardines crammed in the can with no idea of what they're doing there whatsoever. I can't even begin how to make sense of their placement in an artistic perspective. Why is Hyorin shown in two semi closeup renders while Bora is shown in two full body renders? Why are their bodies impossibly darker than their faces? What is up with the glaring light on the top part of Hyorin's face? I just can't seem to find a rhyme and reason to the decision making of your people placement.

6/10 pts Other stuff- I like the background of the sea and sky. But aside from that, there is pretty much nothing else. As I have said in other reviews, minimalism is good but you should know well what your elements do because the fewer they are, the more attention each one of them gets. The white shapes and the ribbon are a bit random, I like that on the right side o

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AXISfling
#1
Hello darl! I'm from J F Y . It's a graphic shop. Would you be interested to be part of our affies?
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Bbfairline
#2
Chapter 2: Username: Bbfairline
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/406221
Your Request: Poster
Story Title: Arranged With You ( First Love) The first love word make it small without the bracket
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Story Summary: She love him but he changes because of him and she decide to forget him,Her "First Love" but she been forced marry to him.What happen?
Genre/Mood: Romance and Schoollove
Rated/Not: Not Rated
Character You Want to Put in Poster: EXO,Luhan and Byun Jiyoung. (Can you chose the picture because I don't know how to chose a specific picture)
Specific: Quates : You are my FIRST LOVE , can you be my LAST LOVE?
Designer You Pick: Katakatica
Anything Else: Nothing ~ Just do your best. ^^
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coldcoffee
#4
Chapter 2: GRAPHIC REQUEST

Username: coldcoffee
Profile Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/690634
Your Request: poster
Story Title: Good Luck
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/782655
Story Summary: Lu Han had broken up with Mina leaving her with only 'good luck' words. The words that Mina hates so much. On the other hand, Mina's best friend, Minseok, tried his best to make Mina and Lu Han back together again as Mina suffered from heart disease and predicted to not live for long.
Genre/Mood: angst, romance,
Rated/Not: not
Character You Want to Put in Poster: luhan, xiumin, mina (OC), and hyejin (OC) (about the photos its up to you, really)
Specific: quote: 'good luck to you, baby, good luck to you...' -about the color can you make it dark/black with red/pink color as the ornaments such as for words, etc (but its up to you... kk)
Designer You Pick: DanielArmandLee
Anything Else: -
Password: hamsterleader

thankyou very much ^^
Taodaypanda
#5
Chapter 27: Thank you very much for the review. I'll work harder in the future.
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#6
Hi. I'm starting a shops list and I want to add your shop/gallery/list/contest/roleplay :
Read the rules, complete this form , put it in the comments box for this link and you will be on the list.

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MidnightNightingale #7
Chapter 2: GRAPHIC REQUEST FORM
Username: MidnightNightingale
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/127480
Your Request: Poster and Background
Story Title: Beyond the Magic Mirror
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/722576/beyond-the-magic-mirror-friendship-romance-exo-luhan-sehun-hunhan-slightangst
Story Summary: Sehun meets a boy who befriends him and cares for him. He grows feelings for said boy and their friendship deepens but he couldn't help but still feel melancholic over the fact that they can't be together... because they were on different sides of the mirror.
Genre/Mood: Slight angst, drama, friendship, romance
Rated/Not:
Character You Want to Put in Poster: (name and picture link, only HQ image please. We may change the picture if necessary, but we will try not to)
Specific: I want it to have a sad atmosphere with Sehun looking through a mirror and trying to reach out to Luhan, the boy on the other side. Quotes: "I wish you were standing right next to me."
Designer You Pick: DanielArmandLee
Anything Else: I leave the designer to do her thing! I have trust and faith that she can make it daebak! xD Thank you~!
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sekaii
#8
Graphic Review Form
Username: sekaii
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/223353
Graphic Tittle: Never Let Go
Graphic Link: http://i.imgur.com/WFpatyu.png
Genre/Mood: light angst
Experience: Gimp and 1 month
Focus On: everything, but mainly theme.
Strictness Level: Harsh. I want to know what I can improve on in order to make my posters look better.
Reviewer You Pick: sorarius
Anything Else: I wanted to go from my sharpen effect of making graphics to a softer effect of making posters. I want to know if its a tad blury since I applied some blur to it.
Password: hamsterleader

please and thankyou <3
bottleofdreams
#9
Chapter 2: Username: petrabigail
Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/206206
Graphic Tittle: Best Wishes To You
Graphic Link: https://i.minus.com/jX2TyqAr7weof.png
Genre/Mood: some romance angst, tiny bit of fantasy I think?
Experience: Photoshop and a year more or less
Focus On: everything
Strictness Level: honest but not rude
Reviewer You Pick: DanielArmandLee
Anything Else: none. I made this before the previous review, so same mistakes could happen ><
Password: hamsterleader
Thank you before!