Chapter 1: Aaaaah this was so adorable! I like how easy if a read this is, but at the same time it had characters that were relatable and very, very life-like. Well done! I am honestly looking forward to the next chapter! ^ ^
Chapter 1: Wow! First all like my dongsaeng (Chiimii) said, this is amazing. You my dearest author-nim are amazing! This is so detailed and I can also see the scenes flash before my eyes. You have done, a very good job, and have me hooked. Five chapters, long? I'm looking forward to it!
- Abi
Chapter 1: Haha, I didn't expect anything other than greatness from you. At first I was like 'damn, this chapter is long. Maybe I could split it in half and read it over two day' but then when I started reading, I couldn't stop. I'm a really slow reader so I managed to finish it in an hour.
Your writing style seriously is remarkable, I could literally see the scenes dancing across my eyes. It wasn't me reading, I felt as though I was watching a movie. It felt really good, hehe.
The friendship between Chanyeol and Baekhyun was just envious. And the way you portrayed Kyungsoo put me in a state where I was laughing so hard that I was grasping for oxygen few minutes later.
I can't wait for more but I know you have a life, so take your time :D.
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