2.

Convincing

"I wasn't really going to shoot."

"Of course you weren't. Now shut up." Eric tightens his grip on the steering wheel, teeth gnashing together irritatedly. He glances at the cuffed man sprawled in the back seat from his mirror, glaring with what he hoped to be an intensity that'll blow the other into smithereens.

"Honest! I needed to make sure I end up in jail and I only needed to scare you--" the man narrows his eyes at him--any smaller and they'll disappear, Eric snorts at the thought--and groans. "You don't believe me, do you?"

"Well, congratulations," Eric spat bitterly, "you just landed yourself in jail. Happy?"

The man smirks contentedly back at him and all Eric wants to do is to wipe that -eating grin right off his smug face.

"Never..." he growls, knuckles turning white, "...don't you dare... Hurt Hyesung like that. Ever. I'll... I'll kill you."

"Oh..." the dirty, bloodied man sits up and leans towards the glass window that separates him from the police officer, interest plain on his features. "The pretty detective? The one you're pining after?"

The car violently jerks to the right, before screeching to a halt near the sidewalk. A fist nearly connects with the that loathsome, sneering face if it weren't for the barrier, and a loud, resounding crack cuts through the heavy air.

"You--!"

"Relax, relax! I'm not gonna hurt him, geez..." He sinks back down into the padded seats, amusement still evident in both his eyes and his smile. "Issues..."

Eric seriously contemplates knocking the other out cold, again.

ㅇㅇ

The suspect sits in a guarded waiting room while the officials discuss what needed to be done. Eric is only half listening--he thinks to the fair detective back at the crime scene and then to the short man currently behind glass. There is no one he hates more than the one who ruined whatever semblance of an image Hyesung had of him; no doubt the detective hated his guts.

"Mr. Mun," an older higher-up looks pointedly at Eric, wrinkles set deep into his forehead and around his white whiskers. "You are to keep this man under close surveillance."

"Close surveillance, sir?" Eric stutters, pulling himself out of the reverie.

"House arrest, Mr. Mun. We've deemed him mentally unstable and believe it's in our best interest--and his--to have him under surveillance at all times." The man fixes a stern gaze at the young officer. "We also believe, after what Detective Shin has told us about your behaviour at the crime scene, that putting you off of active duty will do you a world of good."

Eric panics--his job, his personal life, his love interest are at stake--and hastily places a hand on the elderly's arm. The older man glares at him before shaking him off impatiently.

"But, sir--you can't--I didn't mean--"

"Understand, Mr. Mun, that this is only temporary... And by no means a choice."

Defeated, dejected, and downright depressed, Eric bows curtly to the senior officer and immediately leaves the room. He sends one last scowl at the midget of a man behind the glass panels at the back of the room, accidentally catching the other's gaze.

The easy smile on the other's face nearly makes Eric cry.
 


please understand i dont know anything about house arrest or anything ;;

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DashboardSmiley
#1
lol I was soooooooooo happy when I saw your update I started clapping like a seal ;)
and if this is what we get for the long wait then I don't mind waiting at all (I hope you'll update again soon though ;)) Do you know how HAPPY I am to see this??? =)))))

yah Eric, don't treat him like that just because he made you look pathetic in front of Hyesung. Your behaviour now is w~a~y more pathetic than that :(
I just pictured Minwoo, looking all cute and bubbly and then him in that kitchen... looking all sad and... it makes my blood boil >:O stupid idiot Eric :///

I love your stories and you're an awesome AWESOME writer. Don't you even dare think otherwise =)
update soon =D
MMM123 #2
Chapter 4: OMG you updated. BEST THING EVER!! Your writing is great, what do you mean it isn't good?!
By the last sentence, I was on the verge of crying: "I'm just a criminal...." Very well written.

By the way, I was the one who asked you to write something for Minwoo's birthday, right?! I asked everyone ^^ but it's OK, write something for Eric's Birthday, deal? XD

Please please please update soon. It's a great story and I like it's storyline.
moreover, I write a Ricmin chaptered fic, if you have time, take a look at it ^^
Update soooooooooonnnnn fighting ~
MMM123 #3
I really like your story :))) don't drop it please just update whenever you have time
ricjindy #4
Chapter 3: Wow, this was soooo good. I dont why, but I cried when read this chapter. Great job authornim~ Update soon. Cant wait to see what will happen next ^^
MMM123 #5
*crying my eyes out*
Please don't drop this story :((((
It deserves to be writen ~
MMM123 #6
Waiting for the next chapter Author-nim ^^
Update soon pls ;)
DashboardSmiley
#7
Chapter 3: I was almost jumping up and down in happiness when I saw that you had updated... and then when I read through it... TT.TT

awweeeeee poor Minwoo... I mean, I know he's the *bad guy* and all and I can understand the hatred Eric feels towards him.. but the way he's treating him is so sad...

I felt so sorry for him when Eric told him to keep the couch clean and he said I'm a clean person... awwwww Minwoo... ( *balling my fists at Eric*.. stop treating him like that you idiot... )

soooooo soooooooooooo glad that you updated... hope we won't have to wait long for the next update because this is a awesome AWESOME story ;)
MMM123 #8
Chapter 3: Wow I like the plot VERY muchhhhhhhhh.... It is great... I'm so curious to know why Minbongie needs to go to jail.... Don't worry about the legal things you mention, i also don't know anything in this case...
Update sooooon plsssssss else I will die of waiting ~~~~~~
MMM123 #9
Waiting for the next chapter *wink*