Commiseration

Jammy 101: Poems & Such

Commiseration

Pity? That doesn't work with me.
Sympathy? Who cares for such thing?
Maybe it works well with the poor,
Maybe it works with victims,
But not with me.
Being pitied at makes me feel weak.
Being
sympathized at enrages me.
It may seem preposterous to others-
But I don't care about what they think.
Maybe I'm stubborn, maybe I'm just persistent,
But I want to be respected and to be a role model to others.

On the other hand...
I just want to be in someone's arms and just let my tears out,
Releasing the pain of my heart...
I just want someone to kiss me and whisper,
"It's okay, you don't have to be strong all the time,"
and smile as if I were a beautiful, frail flower.

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Ramiya #1
Chapter 4: WOah! I really loved the first four lines soon much coz its the truth in the present world. Well done author -nom :-)
Ramiya #2
Chapter 3: It's simple just a 8 lined poem.But,it carries soon much meaning and pain in it.When I read it I could actually feel all those feelings and pain.Well done author-nom:-)
BirthdayCake14
#3
Love this ^^ So beautiful ; uuu ;
--acatalepsy
#4
Chapter 18: hey, I read your poems. All of it and it makes me cry so hard. Are you feeling sad, honey? I'm getting so emotional just by reading all the poems, oh my god, I really hope someone could promote you as a writer of poems' book with one of AFF user named kloh-ay. You guys are just great. I just can't... this is too perfect!
paintheskyy #5
Chapter 16: Your poems, the words. it carries so much pain that I can only hope that they are all mere fiction. But a side in me is nagging and telling me that it is not fictional. and... /hugs/ I just wish you are doing alright girl. Coming from a stranger it will be weird, but girl, you are beautiful. And these words don't bring you justice. I just wish from the bottom of my heart that your poems will reflect you, and not the hut that you are feeling. The hurt don't make you, you. It moulds you but it will never be you. I wish you all the best babe. xoxo