✎Nothing More Than That✍  reviewer: XOEXOSupFanFan

Title ( 4/5) After reading your one-shot, your title clicked with the story right away. However, the title isn't THAT intriguing, it did raise a little curiousity in me :)

Appearance ( 4/5) Your poster is OK, it isn't that great. The reason I'm saying this is because I felt like the poster didn't really express anything, it does show a little bittersweet aura, but that is it. I also think that Suzy and Jaebum's appearance on the poster is kind of unnecessary. I was going to give you a 3 out of 5, but your chapter layout is really nice :)

Description and Forward ( 15/15) I really liked how you made the description like a flashback time line format. It was like a foreshadow of how the story's atmosphere would be like, bittersweet, more on the sweet side :)

Plot ( 30/30) I really like your plot, I literally have nothing bad or faulty to say about it at all! The character's characteristics are quite realistic, so you developed them really well. Your plot description and theme on how you would show the reader's a snippet of their earlier years went smooth, it didn't feel like it was something unnecessary at all. I applaud you :)

Grammar ( 15/15) WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT, ENGLISH IS NOT YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE?! Your grammar was amazing! The description couldn't have been better, I swear to god! If English isn't your first language then I'm really proud of you for being able to pull it off so well. *CLAPS LIKE THUNDERS*

Flow ( 10/10) One-shots are sometimes hard to handle a good flow because you know, its like telling a story in one chapter. The flow in your story was really good and I think it was mostly because it consisted of flashbacks, which I like :) The way you initiated the flashbacks weren't messy either, it was clean and smooth, straight to the point. 

Originality ( 9/10) In a way, this is slightly cliche, hooking up during weddings has been used before. However, you had your own little twist to it, using insults as a form of affection ^^ I like that :)

Enjoyment ( 10/10) I really liked this one-shot and I'm totally subscribing ^^ I literally spazzed on my bed when Haylee brought up the "interested in another woman" thing haha XD

Overal Score ( 97/100) Probably the highest score I've give so far!

Extra note from Reviewer: To answer your concern on grammar, you are doing perfectly fine! So don't worry about it ok? Your plot may have a slight hint of cliche-ness, but you put your own little twist in it, so I really like it :) You're doing a great job author-nim ^^

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