Chapter 9: Thank you so much for reviewing my story :) I'll be sure to keep your advice in mind and I'll use them as a guide to improve my story. Also, regarding the flow of the story, I didn't include all those details because I don't want to drag on too much. I want the readers to figure things out by themselves with the help of their own imagination so yeah :) Also, let me just clear up one thing. Jin isn't actually famous. He may be a basketball player and all but he definitely isn't popular. There is a reason as to why I made him appear as though he is but it won't be any fun to spoil it here, now would it? The same goes for Hyun Ji. She isn't actually a loner. There is a reason why she doesn't have any friends. There's a reason as to why she avoids everyone, especially Jin but that shall be figured out as the story unfolds itself ;) Oh and thank you, lovelyreaders, for subscribing and thank you, imyeoniyeoni, for the high points, it made my day! By the way, I hope it's okay if I were to post up your review in a thread I made just for the reviews I receive for 'Being Afflicted'. Also, I've credited this shop already :)

Chapter 13: Wow omg I have picked up and I am so super happy by my review. I saw you as my new subbie and my heart leap . I want to always write good stories like this. Thanks. >< I dunno why when I write oneshots I make ugly foreward pages. I will definetly request a poster and fix up my page.And of course credit you. ^^ Thank you so much.

Chapter 1: Username: hanhyunah1117

Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/342475

Story Title: My Handsome Neighbour

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/397838/my-handsome-neighbour

Genre: Romance

Description: A girl live alone in Seoul and has a new neighbour

Chapter(how many)/Oneshot: 33 chapters

What would you like me to focus on: everything, grammar especially

Reviewer: Imyeoniyeoni

Password: Lovely writers

Anything else: This is my very first fanfic, so i really need your review. thanks :)

Chapter 11: thank you for the review! I've credited you in my foreword :) thank you so much!!

Chapter 1: Username: ILuvSkyDragon

Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/202370

Story Title: Movie's Over

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/670690/movie-s-over-mpreg-tao-kris-suho-krisho

Genre: Family, angst, sad, mpreg (I don't get into to much detail about the mpreg)

Description: Junmyeon's movie is over.

Chapter(how many)/Oneshot: Chapter, only 3.

What would you like me to focus on: I just want your honest opinion on the story, like the flow and grammar.

Reviewer: XOEXOSupFanFan

Password: Lovely Writers

Anything else: Thank you.

Chapter 8: Picked up! Thanks a bunch for such a detailed review and pointing out all the things I should fix. I'm glad it was enjoyable, until now I was doubting the plot and it's originality since the vampire concept is constantly used nowadays.
A little spoiler, the ash hair colored stranger is Jungmin if you haven't figured it out. It's his look from the "give me your heart" PV concept, so i'll make sure to ask a poster shop to make up for appearance.
I'll make sure to credit! Thanks again.

Chapter 10: Thank you so much for the review. Very good insight. Made me realize details that I didn't even think of focusing on. Thank you so much for taking the time to do it! God Bless You!

Chapter 1: Username:ISpyASpider

Profile Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/308588

Story Title:I Dare You

Story Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/640836/i-dare-you-dare-hyesun-oneshot-exo-kris

Genre:school life, one shot

Description: The Queen of Truth or Dare meets her ultimate dare when she is dared to kiss the most frightening boy in the whole school. Kris Wu!

Chapter(how many)/Oneshot: One Shot

What would you like me to focus on: Style, grammar, plot and enjoyment.

Reviewer: Weilyn

Password: Lovely Writers

Anything else:

Chapter 1: Username: nfhafiza

Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/529732

Story Title: Ludos

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/659609/ludos-highschool-exo-kai-kris-teenlove

Genre: Romance, High School, Teen Life.

Description: When he asks her to be his girlfriend, she is well aware of the game he’s playing.

When she says yes, he realizes there’s another game she's playing on her side.

They both comprehend they’re not in love, they both understand the risk of putting their hearts on the line.

They both realizes that this would probably end in a mess.



They know, it’s just that they don’t care.

Chapter(how many)/Oneshot: Chaptered, 51.

What would you like me to focus on: Characterization and the flow.

Reviewer: I don't mind with anyone :)

Password: Lovely Writers

Anything else: Thank you for doing this n have a good day! :)

Chapter 1: Username: LilTibbers

Profile Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/638386

Story Title: Thrown Aside

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/744468/thrown-aside-angst-dark-tragic-daehyun-youngjae

Genre: Angst/Tragic

Description: He was a boy with a puppy.
The boy and the puppy soon developed a unbreakable relationship.
But every relationship has cracks, no matter how far they try to save it.
Soon, years of bonding will shatter to pieces like delicate glass and it takes someone along with it.
Daehyun loved Youngjae as a best friend, and Youngjae loved him back as much as a dog can.
What if only one stops loving the other?
How far are you willing to keep your special someone by your side...even when it's a dog?

Chapter(how many)/Oneshot: Oneshot

What would you like me to focus on: Flow & Grammar

Reviewer: Imyeoniyeoni

Password: Lovely Writers

Anything else: My poster & Background hasn't arrived 'yet' XD Please be strict with me