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I'm sort of just testing my writing abilities? So it's going to . But it's awesome xD. 

Wowith...this is like the only good thing I've written...Probably for two reasons : 

1. It's BL. 

2. It's a fanfic~ 

I've never written either until now....YAY. ;3. 

Omg...All TeenTop fans should listen to them singing and performing "candy' o.o...It's so ...cute ... and just like...creepily colorful xD.

~Anyways~

Yay it's done~!!! :D

-like a month later- The ending is sad, I guess. lol...it really did end stupidly =\

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~ One Year Later ~

No. No. No. no, no. I hate this story. It is written terribly. I hate it. If you're going to read any of my fanfics, don't read this one. Go stalk my other stories. My newer ones. Cause this one is horrible.

Carry on. 

Foreword

Uh... *doesn't really know what to write here* >.>....

Niel and Chunji are just in their member's house (because they live together) and all the members are out doing random stuff... xD.

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Gkarthik #1
Chapter 14: right now all I want is a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!! but the story is really good, just a few grammar mistakes or wrong wording but other than that it's really good...... damn I'm all depressed now!!!!
ChanheeNiel
#2
Chapter 14: I love how finally chuniel couple settle down..its so sweet..and rickjoe couple too...but really sad for changjo...btw this interesting...love it so much..
ChanheeNiel
#3
Chapter 3: Sorry because i just gound this story and its really interesting...this chapter so funny..i dunno why but then i burst into laughter when niel said " After we did, the girl had just this shocked look on her face, as if someone just killed her entire family in front of her."...haha...so funny..
ilovesungyeollie
#4
Chapter 14: :O cap you pabo. How why NO CHANGJO WHY?!?! ;A; ...but at least my rickjoe is happy i guess ^^
LovingKitty #5
Chapter 14: OMG Changjo died noooooo!!! poor Changjo aish CAP want to strangel him now asih T^T
angelvipelf #6
I love this story so muchhhh! Seriously it's so cute :)
RLteentopRickJoe21
#7
yep, if the 3 couples ending happily that's too unrealistic, even my story also 3 couples happy ending, i found it unrealistic later, lOLOL XD.

but it's also sad to see Changjo die..

Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, why didnt i found this story earlier??? OMG, the couples is my favorites, I called it NMPOY couples since their dance formation i NMPOY song is coupled like that :D
vanez918
#8
Poor changjo so emo it's sad
vanez918
#9
I like how the characters are well put