Reviewer : summerscents || Story : Click

Title : 3/5
The title is okay, honestly. Pretty relate-able to the story. But the things is, it doesn't stand out. It's just like that. It's the type to blend in with all the other story titles. I could suggest that you think of a better title, but that's totally up to you.

Description/Foreword : 4/5
Pretty short. But still kind of straight to the point. So I've got nothing to say about that.

Grammar : 5/5
I don't mean to offend you or anything, but I'm surprised that I didn't spot any errors in the story. So all's good.

Characters : 4/5
I must say, since the character that was most focused on story was Sehun, I'll only tell what I need to tell about his character. His character's fine, not too cliché, and not too boring. You depicted him to be somewhat kind of far from being sane with the Luhan issue. You did well on that. 

Flow : 4/5
It was okay though, it wasn't rushed, nor was it too slow. So it's good.

Enjoyment : 8/10
As much as I like HunHan, the content didn't quite catch my eye. I liked it though, but not to the extent of me being overly emotional about it.


Overall score : 8.5/10

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