Reviewer : Qilanove || Story : Click

Plot : 3.5/5
I kind of got "pulled" into wanting to read more than just the description.

Title : 4.5/5
I like your title as well, it's perfect and I have never really seen a title around with that title before. There might be others but it's not as common as the title.

Description/foreword : 4.5/5
You definitely know how to make an amazing foreword, confetti to you.

Characters : 4/5
There isn't much to say since the characters so far seem perfectly fine but I can't actually say anything yet for sure. How you elaborate the characterization superb fantastic. I like the way how you want to make the readers to getting pulled from this fic.

Grammar : 4/5
There are some grammatical errors that I have been spot for all night .

1. remeber – remember
2. colorful – colourful

and other from that , I think you should edit it and re-reading again okay .

Flow & Style : 4/5
The flow was good, there really isn't much to say here since it's still in progress. For the Style, it would be better if you did more detail in chapters .

Enjoyment : 4.5/5 
It’s okay and quite interesting for me . Nothing to comment about this .

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