(pulling) triggers

Description

which is more deadly - a gun or a thought?

a gun gives you an opportunity,
but a thought pulls the trigger

 

 


when the kims find their dead son,
there's no stopping the onslaught of tears

 

wrote this for my english assessment
in which jongin and jongdae are siblings
big thanks to --baekseul for recommending my fic in her thread <3
poster + background cr: yong89 at exotoxic graphics shop
review by bacon_baozi at La Lune aux Etoiles Review Shop


 

 


 

sushi_sykes
wow, i'm back here after four years and i've gotten 15 upvotes? i'm so so glad this fic is still being read after all this time. thank you so much for your support! don't ever feel scared or shy to leave a comment about any random thing - i won't bite!

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windinmyhair #1
Chapter 1: Its very emotional. Good job!
iwantyoubaek #2
Woowww the language is so simple but deep! It was so good and the relation and issues were really fleshed out, concise yet subtle. Loved it :3
JEONJUNGK00K #3
Chapter 1: Loved it. But i dont think death is instantaneous even though I'd like to die instantly too. I mean like; what is instant? How long is instant? Instant ramen takes 2 mins to cook. Instant coffee takes 3-4 mins to drink. So how long is instant?
JunMyung
#4
your writing is so beautiful and amazing i cry
JunhyungLuv
#5
Chapter 1: Wow, just wow! I am simply speechless (that`s a good thing) xD
This was really good!
blue_deer
#6
Chapter 1: This is so sad but beautiful at the same time. Depression is a scary thing, even more when you have a gun at hand. The poor parents. Thank you very much for writing this fic :)
j2ster
#7
Chapter 1: this was so beautiful i don't know what to say
Indubutably
#8
Chapter 1: This hurts me omg no I'm not supposed to read things that hurt me ;A;
It was beautiful, I loved this. It had such a deep meaning behind every word and it just hit me in the feelings ;u;
zhangdaes
#9
Chapter 1: Oh my god this is PERFECT. There are tears in my lashes nowwww ;;;; Whyyyyyy

Great story! Keep it up ja? :3