Chapter 2: I'm so so late to this, but this is such an amazing read. I genuinely felt for all the characters here, you wrote it where everyone was relatable. jessica/tae/ even tiffany as well. it was so incredible to read such a well written work. ^^
Chapter 2: This story was like... omg seriously amazing. Like the characterization, emotions and diction were beyond amazing. I've read a lot of things around and some did include the cheating theme but they didn't catch me as much as your story did. I ship Jeti than Taeny so I guess I became biased with them(?) lol but I didn't agree with the whole cheating thing. Even though Jeti's relationship was much more fun and it made Tiffany feel more alive (which suited her character), she deserved someone like Jessica. But of course I knew she loved Taeyeon as well, but I feel like it could've been better for them as friends bc I think she needed more friends being understanding(even though there was Sunny) so it would've been more mature if she talked things out with Taeyeon and maybe ended things to where she didn't cheat so much with Jessica. Of course it would've hurt Taeyeon but I'm sure she would've been able to move on as she isn't a bad personality herself. But another part of me thinks a person like Taeyeon will maybe help change her, but I really look into it and think someone like Jessica will truly make her happy. I mean if with Taeyeon she kept on cheating then obviously something isn't fully right. Taeyeon is just too nice and good of a person where Tiffany can't fully let her go. The ending scene was so powerful when it was like Taeyeon on one side and Jessica on the other, I think I felt my heart stop for a moment. Gosh I've got sooo many thoughts from this. This story was beautiful art work. Thank you for writing this, I really love the reality factor of it.
Chapter 2: Woah.... It's really long... I don't like cheater.... I can't approve Tiff and Jessi's side... But jeti's emotion take all the scenes.... And the way u put the ending like that.... Well... I don't know... I'm speechless i guess... But it's well written...
Chapter 2: Tiffany made me sick,I really wish Taeyeon found out. Tiffany love for her is a ty, only a abusive individual would try to justify.That's the most tragic thing about this story to me.Everyone in Tiffany life enables her bull.With shallow claims of "I'm horrible" which are reviled to be cheap when they get off on the possibility of getting caught.This of course is not insult to you as an author the feelings this story manage to invoke just shows how much of a great story
Chapter 2: Wow. I think this would be my fave one shot from you. I love how you write! I especially like how you wrote the opening scene of this. Really good descriptions, and it literally played like a film in my head.
I felt this has the potential to be an ongoing/multishot just to have a clear ending, but I also felt you ended this perfectly... so I'm confused lol. But really, I love this! I couldn't say anything more ;_; Thank you for such a good read! :) I hope I can read another soshi from you though ;)
Chapter 2: wow...move never actually really hated tiffany before...and she's my 2nd favorite in girls gen. :^) this was really great and you did a really good job for me to actually hate a ficitional part of Taeyeon :)))))
I always have a thing for "Bad Tiffany" in Jeti fanfic. This one is definitely on my list of favorites. Tho it's wrong in every way, somehow I feel for Tiff. What people can do if Love already speak, just accept it because denying is useless. I'm with the ones whose up for the sequel Authorshi :-)
thank you so much for sharing the story Authorsi, you're awesome!
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