Deception

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It's all lies.

 

Everyday she walks around, smiling, when she talks, people ask her not to; when she doesn't, everyone asks if she's okay. Is she? She always thought saying yes would be alright, it wouldn't hurt anyone right? 

 

Everyday he watches her. He admires her for being strong, for being brave, she's everything he isn't  but he loves her nevertheless. He does everything to make her happy but someone already has. He could show her his love, but is it enough?

Foreword

 

Title: Deception

Genre: Slight angst, Romance

Characters: Kai; OC ; Luhan 

Contest Entry for: (  Karma's Second Writing Contest - Fifth Place ); In Love & Insane | Writing Contest

Prompt: "私の夢に何時も君がいます。- In my dreams, there is always you."

Reviewed by:   ♦Troublemaker Review Shop♦

Graphic Creadits: Jimin Graphic Shop

 

Beta: wowsuga

 

Trigger Warnings: Violence, Foul Words...

 

So, this is going to be my first try at a angst so...yeah.

 

 

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rebelliousbear #1
{in love & insane writing contest} hi! Just letting you know the the deadline is on Monday, 14th July so if you want to add anything to your story please do! It doesn't need to be completed but I'll only be judging on what's written so if you haven't gotten to the prompt part of your story, please try your best to incorporate it! Thanks for entering the contest ^__^
Fan_of_Karma #2
Chapter 3: Ah, the ending! Very, very unexpected plot twist. Now, I assume you'll tell me that it's up to me to interpret what happened xD Overall, the story was solid, although I had trouble really relating to Junhee. But the story fits the prompts really well! Plus, I also think that the greatest truth is that no one's perfect ^_^
washupkrease #3
Chapter 2: Oh my god Jongin did it
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