The Star That Fell

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They were friends. They were soulmates. They were lovers.

They were so happy together.

 

Until she fell out of love.

Foreword

This is a non-AU multishot. It has 4 chapters and 2 possible endings.

I will update one chapter every week~

P.S The Chapter numbers are in French... Because I'm a er for European Languages~

I hope you enjoy it:) Please do leave your comments!

Thanks to Linda and Jesica~

Author's Thoughts
PinkSkyy
Might update during the weekend~
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NekoLS #1
Chapter 7: Hmm love is hurt 🤕
Kira007 #2
Chapter 7: Why do you need to make two kind of ending? I mean it's so obvious that you prefer the first ending..
I think it's better for this story to have just one ending, even it's too angsty :)
xcaliz0rz #3
Chapter 7: Attractive title and foreword. I feel that the story is too rushed to be able to really feel the angst. Like the events and the years change way too fast. That's just my 2 cents. Don't mind me :)
euniel #4
Chapter 7: TROLL.


Lol.



I prefer...this one. At least, it would seem that both found happiness in their own way. A closure for Taeyeon and...ugh...yeah...the marriage with...yeah...idunwanasayit. x_x. Anyway, I learned something from this. Me want to write something like this too. Would you hit me if i do? Lol~ i wish i can though...real life .

Ps. Thanks for writing dear...dont take too long away from here.i might miss you~~
euniel #5
Chapter 6: OH CRAP. YOU DID. WAAAAAH...ASDFGHJKKLL! /bites my pillow/ biggirlsdontcry/
euniel #6
Chapter 5: WHAT?!!!!!! NO, YOU WOULDN'T! TAENGOOOOOOOOOOOOO~~~andweeeeeeeeeeeeee~ /hugs pillow tighter/
euniel #7
Chapter 3: THIS.IS.SO.SAD. I'm hugging my fluffy pillow now. Sniff.
HolyCrab #8
Chapter 7: I think the idea that time erases all is kinda disheartening. It makes everything seem so unimportant and showed how insignificant we are in front of time. Am I being morbid if I actually prefer ending A? Lol.

Okay, honestly, I think ending A feels more complete in terms of the story flow. At least the two years was somehow explained in ending A and the flow of emotions was smoother, especially with readers are faced with Taeyeon's abrupt end. As for ending B, the two years was skipped over and suddenly Taeyeon is happily planning Tiffany's wedding so there is a sudden jump in terms of emotions. I think the fact that Tiffany married someone else kinda saved that ending (as opposed to Taeyeon marrying Tiffany which is even more abrupt cos they were just breaking up the last chapter and in between wasn't explained.)

Anyways, great job! All the best for school! =DD
daewaii #9
Chapter 1: seems interesting
tipco09 #10
Chapter 5: Why is this an epilogue if there are still chapters to follow? I guess you do have to fill in a lot of blanks because that end seems abrupt somehow. Haha! I'm not going to make any guesses as to where this is going. Surprise me, Pris. This doesn't change the fact that I like this story. Its very well- written.
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