did not you love me

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Description

Possessive cold Yunho was attracted to Jaejoong beauty and innocence. Though he was a playboy but he wanted Jaejoong all to himself. Now it had been 3 years since they started to love each other at Ist sight but who knows whats going in Yunho mind while innocent Jaejoong actually was in deeply love with him since beginning.

Foreword

Hey guys I am new here and this is my Ist time writing fanfics so please try to appreciate if you somehow liked my work but if in any case I somewhat make you kind of disappoint becuase of some errors and mistakes or any problem to be found I too like to sincerely apologize because english is not my Ist language and writings are not my stuffs but still I am trying to write and will try to give my best.

Your feedback is welcome and appreciated

love you guys.*

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bluejay99 #1 Oct 1, 2015 01:58:48

Chapter 2: This is so confusing, story flow is adding to the confusion. Please don't go down the clichéd line.
And please don't make jaejoong stutter so much, I'm sick of seeing such character development when it comes to jaejoong.

yunlovjae #2 Sep 30, 2015 22:35:24

Yea may be...its a good plot to make a good story but how can I use beta as u told. Well thanks for subscribing.

Sam-facades #3 Sep 30, 2015 16:04:23

Chapter 2: So that what the about right
Am so disgusted with the two of them
Poor JJ
Waiting for update

nadiaalisa #4 Sep 30, 2015 05:49:43

Chapter 1: I thought it was 31 chapters, then when I so into the story, the button next was gone and why?????? Please update it soon author

MuzukashiiKEY #5 Sep 29, 2015 18:49:33

This is really good. I'm curious to see what happens next~

Sam-facades #6 Sep 28, 2015 16:51:32

Chapter 1: People it is not the most perfect English but I can understand it well so stop complaining much

Sam-facades #7 Sep 28, 2015 16:49:28

Chapter 1: what
JJ honey you worth the whole world
Gah that karam hate him

Waiting for your update hon

rodynara #8 Sep 28, 2015 06:26:00

Chapter 1: don't stop keep until you finish

shaleng #9 Sep 28, 2015 02:42:17

I think you can make a good story with this plot but maybe you can use beta or something?

hikarilight #10 Mar 20, 2014 05:54:50

Sorry but I don't understand your spell