Gone

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You are not with me tonight...


You will not be with me tomorrow morning...


This thought makes me feel insane...


You are not with me anymore...

 

Foreword

a new oneshot... it's 87line finally...

and it's angst... sorry if you don't like angst...

inspired by : Cheondung - Gone (it's really a good song omg)

i hope you'll read the story and give some feedbacks :)

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byungheejio #1
Chapter 1: no!!! this fic need sequel. i think byunghee still love seungho. 87line should together forever after TT
please author-nim. sequel with a happy ending ofc *^*
aquakittie
#2
Chapter 1: Yeah I want to know why he was crying... more then likely he was just saying me moved on ... I mean why would he cry if he moved on completely? Also why would he be at the park by himself? That is where he and seungho always spent time together. He was surprised when seungho appeared and then wanted to leave...

Just so you know I hate open ending stories I think if your going to write a story it needs a ending to it. So you can leave it like that if uou want but ill be pretty sad but hey its your story so so what you want.


I just hope they get back together. .. I am a er for happy ending but if not together then at least friends?? All wells hope to see a sequel but if not then see ya on uou next story
kakashilover #3
Oh god ........that's so sad T_T poor seungho ,,,,,but he shouldn't mess with byunghee's feeling like that

I would love to see a sequel of course and I would like to know who's byunghee boyfriend and why he was crying
Liathano #4
Chapter 1: You really must write sequel and I hope Byunghee forgive Seungho
kakashilover #5
T_T Iam totally agree with aqua ,,,,, I even start to cry before read it :(
Please don't be so harsh on the 87 author nim T_T
aquakittie
#6
I usually don't like angst but since there hasn't been much 87 line stuff I am desperate for any 87 line fics I can get sooo... XD

I need my 87 line fix please XD

FIGHTING!