Chapter 8: interesting story line... a few mistakes is very common as I myself make some mistakes in my own story.... keep up the good work and will be waiting for your updates.... Fighting!!

Chapter 8: sweet and warm chapter ^^ thank you for your update

Chapter 8: Too short too short

Chapter 8: A nice chapter author-nim ^_^ I can't wait to read more. Please update soon...

PS I found a few corrections here and there but since I'm reading this from my mobile now, I find it a little difficult to correct them in this comment. I will try to give another comment with the corrections the very moment I get to use my system (that is, if others didn't correct it before then.)

Chapter 7: "Well, we know that not all the womans could possibly say yes directly when someone's asking you to marry a random man in a instant?" SB "Well, we know that not all the women could possibly say yes directly when someone's asking you to marry a random man in an instant?"
"Maybe she's one of my fan?" SB "Maybe she's one of my fans?"

That's all the mistakes. Everything was good tho. Continue with your story unnie~ I like it. and I'll support you!!! Hwaiting~~!!!!

Chapter 7: Ah, a teaser! I can't wait to read more. I am more eager to know what's going to happen... Please update as soon as possible :)

Chapter 6: author-nim.. did you delete the next chapter? :( I cant find your update :(

Author-nim, did you make an update now? I mean chapter 7...

Chapter 6: "Yes, finished my work! It's time for home! Yay!" SB "Yes, my work's finished! It's time for home! Yay!"
""Done boss, good luck for tomorrow! Time for home now...", said me." SB "Done, boss. Good luck for tomorrow! Time to go home now...", I said.
"Just arrived home and my little doggie, Fluffy is the one who's greeting me." SB "Just got home and my little doggie, Fluffy is the one who greeted me."
"Keep searching for my mom and can't find her." SB "I kept searching for my mom but can't find her."
""Oh no, I was forgot! Must I meet him, mom?", said me in worry." SB "Oh no, I forgot! Must I meet him, mom?", I asked in worry."
"Jung Yunho won't falling in love with someone like me." SB "Jung Yunho won't fall in love with someone like me."
"I'm just his fans" SB "I'm just his fan."
"Oh I hope he didn't know that I'm his fans." SB "Oh I hope he didn't know that I'm his fan."

Chapter 6: Nice story... Please update soon... ^^