Saving it on my subscription and will read it later. It's already 2 in the morning in my side of the world so I'll tell you what I think about it later but judging from your subscribers, it's good^^
First comment: I like your description. it draws readers to take a closer look :)
Chapter 2: I legitimately cried whilst I was reading this. How do people even write angst without breaking down? It was beautifully written and laid out.
Chapter 1: Well frick-- OUR LITTLE CHENCHEN WHAT HOW WHY LIKE WOAH ZHANG YIXING YOU STOP RIGHT THERE--
(That was really beautiful, in a sense that my emotions were all over the place. I was squealing when I read about them getting together then I started doing the clicky fingers + gurl you did not!!! when I discovered the truth kdkdjdkskdksdkkdkdkdjdlskd thanks for writing this, soulmate <3)
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