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[CONTENTID1] Premontion by gabbalicious97

Reviewer:Butterflies101 [/CONTENTID1]

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Our Rubric: 

Tittle: --/5. 

 

Description --/5. 

 

Grammar and Spelling --/25.

 

Font --/5. 

 

Plot --/30. 

 

Characters --/20.

 

Overall enjoyment --/10.

 

Total: --/100

Grade Score: --

 

Grading Scale: 

F: 50% or below: we're sorry but it's not a good fic, it needs serious work.

D: 60-69%: okay, but it needs improvement. 

C: 70-79%: solid base for the fic, but problems with the development.

B: 80-89: good fic, enjoyable, with few mistakes in grammar, plot or characters.

A: 90-94%: great fic! Very enjoyable, easy to read and good flow of plot.

A+: 95% and up: Absolutely fantastic, we would recommend! It goes to our Wall of Honor.

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Title: 4/5:

Its an okay title; I guess it has to do with the story

 

Description 3/5:

Firstly, highlighted text is a 'no-no' in the description or anywhere else in the story; its hard to see and frankly, if the reader can't easily see what it is you're writing, they will not hesitate to skip to the next. There are gramatical errors in the description for please p

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WinterEssence00
#1
Chapter 7: Thank you for the review. I feel like I should've waited until I posted more chapters to show my approach and but oh well lol. I'll make sure to edit my grammar (when I free write it happens) and sorry you were bored until the third chapter but I'm not sure how to fix that since nothing significant is supposed to happen. >///<
Thanks again! ^^
jeonwonussi
#2
Chapter 6: WAAA~ Thank you so much for the review! I really can't believe that my story made it to the Wall of Honor. I almost cried. :') I'll take note of everything you've pointed out. Gonna go and edit the foreword and description now. I seriously at those. Haha. I'll watch out on my verb tenses, too. Kkkk~ Again, thanks so much! :)
key-xing #3
Chapter 5: Thanks for the review! :D I'll edit and make some of the changes you suggested ^^
BubblyHunHan
#4
Chapter 4: Thanks for the review and I'll improve. Thanks anyway :)
I'm sorry to make you read it.
tyffah
#5
I have requested :)
WinterEssence00
#6
Hello~ I sent in a request ^^
jeonwonussi
#7
Hello! I just sent a request! :)
9501kagu28
#8
Chapter 2: Thank you so much for you review, I will look over all that you commented on!
key-xing #9
I requested :D
BreBre
#10
Chapter 1: *scratches my head* Yeaaaahhhhh i really need to pay attention when i type. when i type, i type fast and think as i go with the chapter yeah grammar ans spelling really killed me. And change the font too....