[CONTENTID1] The Way Back to Life by 9501kagu28

Reviewer: Butterflies101 [/CONTENTID1]

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Our Rubric: 

Tittle: --/5. [Is the tittle related to the story?]

Description --/5. [Is the description catchy and accurate to the story?]

Grammar and Spelling --/25. [If English is your first language, you will be penalized in a stricter manner about the errors.]

Font --/5. [Is the font readable?]

Plot --/30. [Is the plot original, and interesting? Is it developed in a correct manner and pace?]

Characters --/20. [Is there character growth (development)?]

Overall enjoyment --/10. [Is your story appealing? Other scores of the rubric may affect this.]

Grading Scale: 

F: 50% or below: we're sorry but it's not a good fic, it needs serious work.

D: 60-69%: okay, but it needs improvement. 

C: 70-79%: solid base for the fic, but problems with the development.

B: 80-89: good fic, enjoyable, with few mistakes in grammar, plot or characters.

A: 90-94%: great fic! Very enjoyable, easy to read and good flow of plot.

A+: 95% and up: Absolutely fantastic, we would recommend! It goes to our Wall of Honor.

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Title: 5/5:

I really liked the title, it’s unique and from what I read in the foreword, it relates to the story well. Good job on that.

Description 2/5: 

There were a lot of things wrong with this section. First off, you shouldn’t highlight the text in your foreword, or anywhere else in the story for that matter, it makes reading it difficult bacause it's hard on the eyes. Also, you should take off, “Is this the beginning of a love story?”, because obviously, it is a love story, and it just isn’t necessary.  For your ‘characters’ section, the name “Seung gi” should be “Seung Gi”, if you’re going to separate the syllables in that way. For example, if I were to write, “Jonghyun”, the separated version of that would be “Jong Hyun”, not “Jong hyun”. Do you get it? Other than the technical errors, I actually like the content of the description, I just have to mark you down for those mistakes.

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