[CONTENTID1] Clenched Heart by BubblyHunHan

Reviewer: Butterflies101[/CONTENTID1]

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Our Rubric: 

Tittle: --/5. 

Description --/5. 

Grammar and Spelling --/25.

Font --/5. 

Plot --/30. 

Characters --/20.

Overall enjoyment --/10.

Total: --/100

Grade Score: --

Grading Scale: 

F: 50% or below: we're sorry but it's not a good fic, it needs serious work.

D: 60-69%: okay, but it needs improvement. 

C: 70-79%: solid base for the fic, but problems with the development.

B: 80-89: good fic, enjoyable, with few mistakes in grammar, plot or characters.

A: 90-94%: great fic! Very enjoyable, easy to read and good flow of plot.

A+: 95% and up: Absolutely fantastic, we would recommend! It goes to our Wall of Honor.

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Title: 3/5:

Its an okay title I guess, but in context, I don't see it having anything to do with the story from the description I read. Its not something that would really grab a reader's attention. 

Description 2/5:

I honestly had no idea what was going on in the description. Apparently the main character talks to non-humans? Or is it that she doesn't talk to a lot of people?-I don't know. You mentioned that she isn't friendly, but why? And for your Sehun character, you mentioned that he smirked when she broke up with him, that was very confusing