Chapter 1: "I love you. And you'll never know" was a good line. It's catchy. :) tho, is it really 'and'? Or should it be 'but'? Anyway, this was a nice read. Thank you for writing. ^_^.
Chapter 1: -dead- sorry if I'm spamming you with my comments but seriously! XD you're such a great writer <3 especially when it comes to TaeNy. Please write more taeny in the future :)) it's always great entertainment to read your fics :D
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