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Hello there, I'm Marilyn. One of my favourite subjects in school is English, so I pretty much love reading and writing. I think sometimes I can be a bit straight forward when writing reviews but that's only because I want to help you improve your story and not see a good plot go to waste instead, so don't be afraid to ask for a review from me :)

Brindianajones (Available)

Hey hey hey people, I'm Brinda! I love almost everything but you know what I love even more? Reading a well written story. Like Miley said, "Everybody makes mistakes, everybody has those days~" Well fear not for I am here to help correct and review your stories! I'm pretty lenient most of the time but I'll be sure to let you know if something needs to be changed. Yup, so you know where to look for the grammar nazi.

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jeonnamjoo #1 Dec 31, 2014 06:27:17

hi, did this shop still open?

minhyukismine #2 Aug 8, 2014 22:19:18

Annyeong. I just have a question. Will the review of my story be posted here or PMed to me? :)

minhyukismine #3 Aug 5, 2014 03:01:54

Title: Never thought it was you
Author: minhyukismine
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/632390/never-thought-it-was-you-minhyuk-romance-you-exo-kai-btob
Length: 6 chapters
Reviewer: Brindianajones
Theme(s): Romance
Additional Comments: It's my first fanfic so yeah...
Password: A

kaisooumma #4 Jun 20, 2014 00:08:04

Hello, I want to ask about the progression of my story review. Thank you ^^

RedBluePen #5 Jun 12, 2014 04:19:46

Hi, wanna be affies?

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kaisooumma #6 Jun 10, 2014 02:50:07

Chapter 1: Title: Half of Me (is You)

Author: kaisooumma

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/701595/half-of-me-is-you-angst-romance-exo-kai-kyungsoo-kaisoo

Length: 7 chapters

Reviewer: MarilynTheMushroom

Theme(s): romance, angst, fantasy

Additional Comments: the story still has not enter the fantasy part.

Password: Thunder by EXO

Thank you ^^

PaperHearts14 #7 Jun 8, 2014 14:42:09

Would you like to be affiliates? :3

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Angel110 #8 Jun 5, 2014 10:04:43

Chapter 7: Thank you for the amazing review! I'm glad you liked it although it was a cliché story line :) We tried our best to make it interesting and different! I'm very, very happy about your words and I will try to change the part with Teuk's appearance a little^^
Okay, somehow I can't write a longer comment right now.. I had a job interview so my head is full.-.
Thank you so much for the review and it's okay that it was late, everbody is very busy at times^^
I credited you already<3

bubbleteacups #9 Jun 2, 2014 19:05:31

Title: Where my Demons Hide

Author: bubbleteacups

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/726451/where-my-demons-hide-abuse-angst-shinee-taemin-exo-kai-masterslave

Length: 10/? Chapters

Reviewer: Anyone who's into masterslave themes?

Theme(s): angst fantasy masterslave

Additional Comments: I'd like to know whether my character and plot transitions are natural/cliche/etc

Password: Welcome to the World

Angel110 #10 May 20, 2014 08:46:47

Chapter 6: I also can't understand those people-.-"
I'm always commenting when my review is done and if I can't credit the shop right away I tell them that I will do it later and this is mostly only a few hours later.-. isn't very difficult to do so..