Chapter 1: Thank you SO much for putting your story on my wall i'm having goosebumps the way you described baekhyun's feelings is so beautiful im shaking!!the part where you used the readers name really got me Im going to religously follow all off your stories now ;u; you're the best!!~<3

Chapter 1: The short chapter has described the pain and sadness that Baekhyun felt, when he lost his love one as well as his own life.
Tbh, i don't like to read angst story, since it could make me cry..
But, yeah, still, I love to read most of the story.. *^*
there's no typo, but maybe some of the words need to be either substitute or replaced with other words.
Like "rain beated..." --> (maybe) "rain poured.."

Chapter 1: wow that was beautifully written i- okay that's too short but still heartwrenching and i can feel all his pain ugh ;;;;;;
great job!! thank you:)

Chapter 1: Wow! Haha i don't what to say... It was great :B even if it was angst C: because i don't actually like angst that much, but i'd totally read this again.

Chapter 1: O.o that story line was award winning haha! I loved how the tension built up along with the suspense and tone. You gave subtle hints to the reader to help them understand his past. The.entire story appealed to me and I must say after reading your other story, your writing technique has certainly improved. I would suggest you go over minor sentence errors like the pain lying, would be something like the pain from lying or would of.... Should be would have or would've. Andmaybe why he finally chose to end it. What problem caused him to finally go over the edge. But other than that the story is great. Also I liked the meaningful AN at the end. If you don't mind me asking how did you put the readers name in????? I found that interesting since I've seen that before on other stories from people... Well done!

Chapter 1: Great story. One of the best Baekyeol I've ever read. I love it. Great grammar, no typo, no misspelling. This story has a great storyline. If I may suggest, I think you should explain more about why Baekhyun finally falls into that breaking point. I meant, I've red many other stories about suicide, but I think if he waste his life just because an ignorant mother and that his lover has gone, I think it just such a waste. The life that God has given, he throw that away. I meant it's like he still has a house, and he still can eat. so why? That's all. Still a great story.

Chapter 1: That was a good story well written I must say!! Good job! <3

Chapter 1: Wow, just wow. The story is well written, and the plot was so well thought out that I ignored the minor errors, because it was so good. Honestly, there was a part of my life where I almost had that 'breaking point', but I didn't want to waste my life, so I had to move on. What can I do? That's the only choice I have, LIVE.

Also, I loved the part where Baekhyun was having a battle with himself, and those voices must be Baekhyun's guilt, and the story details, very nice.

And I guess your story is a bit realistic. A lot of people are on the verge of giving up, and some end up doing what Baekhyun did (in the story), but I hope people won't give up on life, because life is a precious thing to have.

Anyways, great job author nim!!

Btw, I couldn't help but notice the AllHailMochi by the Author's note, by any chance, was that me? Because as I remember, there was another author with the same name, so I'm not really sure. Lol, congrats author nim!! Your story is so striking and realistic, good job!! Keep it up! Fighting! <3