アカナシアの物語 (The Story of Akanashia)

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"He heard his father's voice and in happiness, ignoring the pain, he looked up to meet his face.  It wasn't blank.  His eyes burned with a disgust; his nose flared with anger; his cheeks, red with rage; his mouth twitched as if he were about to yell, but the words wouldn't form properly.

The young boy choked a sob before his mother's face appeared, matching the expression of his father's.  Then Dai-chan.  Keito.  Yuya.  Even little Yuri pouted and put on a mean scowl at him.  'I hate you Onii-san!' Yuri screamed, throwing snow that he grabbed with his little hands.

'How dare you betray us?' his mother cried.

'I thought I could trust you Ryosuke,' Daiki growled at him. 'How could you do this to us?  To our country!?'

'You are no son of mine,' his father harshly spat.  And Ryosuke felt the burning pain through his chest once more before he felt himself falling."

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Akanashia is a world that consists of five countries--Kazekoku, ruled by King Ninomiya; Tsuchikoku, ruled by King Aiba; Mizukoku, ruled by King Ohno; Hikoku, ruled by King Sakurai; and Yukiguni, ruled by King Matsumoto.  The five countries' kings have had a strong bond for as long as anyone can remember.   However, due to corruption that is unknown to all of the others, war will break out between them and force each country to find what they truly believe in and who is the real enemy.  

Foreword

A few things to note about my story:

  • This story has a large cast of people (including all of Arashi, HSJ, Tegomass, and more Johnny's apperances and various Japanese artists) in addition to my own original characters.  However, the main character of my story is ultimately Yamada, Ryosuke.  
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  • Please disregard the characters' original ages and surnames (and in some cases their names all together).  I have changed names and ages as I please.  To avoid confusion, I will do an updated character log before each part.  
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  • I only own my Original Characters and the story plot.  
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  • The genre is mostly fantasy, though there are also themes of hurt/comfort, war, suspense, drama, with some romance, among others, I'm sure.
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  • It is a habit of mine to throw in some Japanese words here and there (very rarely will I ever type in kana/kanji in an English story, mostly it will be romanized) into the story.  I will put a note at the end for the English translation in case anyone doesn't understand the meaning.

 

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Ryosuke meets Mirai; Chapter 16 is finally up~

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hazel_duhds #1
Chapter 16: yatta! this story is quite good i finish the 16 chpters in one sitting(heheh).. im rooting for the nxt update... and im rooting for a more YAMASHI moments from the story,yehey! but why is mirai older than ryo
Wallfllower
#2
It so long time to waiting you but I'll waiting for next chapter. I hope you will find a new inspiration.
Riena82 #3
Chapter 16: Hi momo chan... ^^
Finally, the long awaited encounter!

and there goes- Nishikido the vulture- always distrusting and giddy---- *let me spat him away-for Ryo-chan :S
He is surely watching his back well. But, even a perfect plan have flaws- and i'm hoping there is a loophole somewhere ^^

I know to trust means to pay a high price for something- but i am happy that Ryosuke is willing to bet on Mirai's offer. Hope it is worth it.. *crossing my fingers*

Do something about Miko's suspicion please... not that i blame her for being paranoid- with this whole situation, she ought to be... she will be a perfect ally, if she is on their side...#sigh

I don't know, but one thing that i am perfectly sure of, for now is Mirai is an ally for Ryosuke and she indeed have plans. (she is just manipulating Nishikido's trust to her benefit. (hopefully my assumption is correct ne, momo chan..)

King Ohno is sure getting on his feet with this whole thing- i do hope he is planning to reunite the countries, instead of making the situation worse.

p/s : Sankyu for the updates, looking forward for more- and good luck on your internet connection, luv! :D
Wallfllower
#4
Chapter 16: Yosh!!!! Finally, he meet Mirai. I hope the way to see his brother not has a obstrucle.
ekadarmayanthi #5
finally ryosuke and mirai meet! and I can't wait when mirai will explained about ryosuke's brother to ryosuke, and can't wait until ryosuke meet his brothers ^^

thanks for update momo-chan, and ganbatte for the next chapter as well ^_^
Wallfllower
#6
Chapter 15: Wow This is so dram fic and complicated. I hope the stress situation of this will be clear. Poor Ryosuke to get involve in this plan. I wish you will write some interaction of Yamashi hehe~ . Waiting for next chapter.
Riena82 #7
Chapter 15: Hi momo chan :D
Genki desu ka? Well, my curiosity button is ON- upon seeing your update…. Hahaha… #shot dead

So, Nishikido is putting his plan in motion, no?
What a psycho he is… #sigh
I want to say he is cruel, but his demand for Ryosuke to attend the ball while surely everyone will be hostile and doubtful (especially his family) towards the poor boy, is beyond sadistic. He is indeed gambling on everyone’s emotions at their best… utterly despicable!!! # I want to stab him!!
Ryo-chan, please stay strong… TT-TT

I kind of get the vibes that Eri likes Ryosuke- but who is she really??
Is she a spy from Yukiguni? Or just plainly taking advantage of the situation?
I can sense jealousy there- transpiring between Miko and Eri…
But maybe I’m wrong ~~~ #whacked

I think the tea and cake is some sort of secret code which Mirai is trying to convey to Ryosuke via Miko. Miko wouldn’t understand as she harbors doubts against Mirai. But, I do hope Ryo-chan get the message!!!.... #crossing my fingers

I am glad he enjoyed Miko’s company- life wouldn’t be so miserable for him at least.

Mirai did surely have a complicated past. But, I love the fact that she is somehow strong and reliant…
Brave enough to stand for what she believes in. My- kind of lady warrior here #bricked

This is getting exciting!!! Do update soon :D <3 <3 <3

P/S: ganbatte for you last year and do make lots of great memories!!!!
ekadarmayanthi #8
Chapter 14: uwaahh,,looking forward for the next chapter already ^^

and finally jun showed his weakness toward mao..
somehow, mirai is so mysterious :D I hope she can save ryosuke and maybe, they will have romance together (?) hehe..me is random, XDD..

daiki and keito too, i really want them to meet ryosuke soon, i don't know why, but i just want it ^^

thanks for update momo-chan, ganbatte for the next chapter ^_^
greyrani
#9
Chapter 14: So, that's the reason about the declaration of war by King Sakurai... And about the letter to Miko in the previous chapter, I'm curious about the sender. The interaction between Jun and Aiba is heartwarming, it showed how a good relationship between kings (and countries). Woah, can't wait to read the moment Mirai meets Ryosuke, too. Mirai is cool and composed, while Ryosuke is the reverse.
Oh, and almost forgot to say, Welcome back Momo-chan. Looking forward to the next updates XD
Riena82 #10
Chapter 13: Yay! You updated^^
Hi momo chan :D Remember me?? haha..

i just did a marathon~~~ *phewwwwhh~~
It is getting more and more scrumptious, this story that is ^^
How long hv i been missing this adventure??
Haha.. sorry-life-got-to-me- >.< *bows*

I miss it terribly,this fic~~~ XD

Noooo... You will never succeed with your evil plans, Nishikido!!
*begs momo-chan endlessly*

This is where the story got extra juicy-i guess-the threat letter and the mysterious Mirai.. Oh Miko~~~ #peeks at Eri for some reasons...o.0
I wonder when they will meet? Ryosuke and Mirai that is...

It is complicated-the relationship between father and son.
Ryosuke and his sacrificial act and Jun his pride and disappointment :<
They could hide it but both loved each other, unconditionally *sigh*
Hope they wont do anything [email protected]

~thanks for the update momo-chan, and ganbatte for the next chapter and your exams ne~ XD <3