Heaven is Orange

What A Boy Wants (Not Quite So Heaven Sent)
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[CONTENTID1]What A Boy Wants (Not Quite So Heaven Sent)[/CONTENTID1]

[CONTENTID2]Heaven Is Orange[/CONTENTID2]

[CONTENTID3]

Just like any normal person would do when confronted by your boyfriend’s lover, I went to go find a glass of orange juice. Orange juice does things to me, I tell you. It’s like pure liquid joy, Happy Drug in a glass. Seriously, there was no need for drugs with this stuff. And that was exactly why I needed it if I was meant to deal with Minhyun in a calm and mature manner, no matter how much I just wanted to whine and pound at his chest with my little kitten strength abilities. It was a good thing the dorm was empty, save for us two…no one to hear Minhyun’s screams, I thought murderously.

 

“So, I know about you and JR, is this going to be a problem for you?” My raised eyebrows,  easily conveying that the answer had better be a no.

 

“Ren…you totaled his car, didn’t you? Do you know how much that thing is worth?!”

 

“Do you have any idea how much I, perfection itself, am worth? Believe me, it’s a lot more than a stupid car,” I sniffed, downing the orange delight in my glass.

 

“It was worth five hundred grand!” Minhyun’s eyes were practically popping out of his head. He may have been cute, but believe me, that expression does not look attractive on anyone. I, however, was too busy choking on my drink to really chastise him,

 

“Seriously?” he had to be joking…it couldn’t have been worth that much…could it? Oh my god I am so going to jail for life. No wonder my friend at the car factory had looked at me like I was insane. Gods how I wish I was suicidal, I could just take care of everything right now with that knife on the kitchen counter. Or that open window in the living room. So many choices, only one life. Suicide is way too hard, let’s skip it.

 

“You didn’t know?!” Minhyun’s eyes only got wider, and I did the only thing I could do at this point: deny everything,

 

“I don’t really know what you’re talking about…What was five hundred grand?” I blinked innocently,

 

“THE CAR!” Minhyun exploded, folding his arms tightly in frustration.

 

“Doesn’t ring a bell,” I giggled in the back of my mind, and came to the conclusion that being “Driven crazy” by someone, was no longer a metaphor. I was going insane, clearly. Why did JR matter so much to me? Sure, I had envisioned spending my entire life with him, loving each other forever just as much as we had when we first confessed to each other. But…seriously, I was going to be in a huge mess with that car issue…I was falling right into the cheating trap. Try to make the other person regret and only continually fall into your own attempts. I was the one regretting now.

 

Minhyun looked ready to strangle me, but I had already switched to a new, more thoughtful, topic of conversation that didn’t find me guilty of something that was totally going to put me behind bars, “Why did you do it?”

 

“Do what?” he snapped, cheeks poofing adorably, almost enough to rival my cuteness. I spun my empty orange juice glass on the counter, watching it slide over the condensation on the counter top like an ice skater.

 

“Sleep with him, when you knew full well that he was committed to someone,” I

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luludeer7_abcdEXO88m
#1
Chapter 9: MINREN ALL THE WAY!!!!!
You did a great great greaaaat job authornim!
Write more beautiful fanfics like this in the future ~~~~
OuOb
sanjana3 #2
Chapter 9: Wow this fic was incredible! I've never felt so connected to a character before I genuinely felt the emotions and a sense of revenge, just not quite as strong as Ren's but close enough Hahaha anyway amazing job look forward to reading more of your stories <3
Polarbear_ice
#3
Chapter 9: hwaa amazing
perfect ending!
Goddess-of-Love
#4
Chapter 8: I loved this chapter. Ren's voice was so strong and clear in this, you did fantastic. We were completely immersed in his head. And I love how you've switched the relationship roles he's comfortable with on him. He's finding that he likes Min and he's okay with being the dom for once because of this. He's really growing and I adored that side of him. I hope things can continue like this, it's so sweet. ^^

You said earlier that you needed a beta, I'm interested! I'm just not sure what it requires ...
chiff_624
#5
Chapter 8: >< poor Minnie,..
Both of them.... I hope min will agree with Ren to get revenge, sometimes you need to be bad too... ^_~
Polarbear_ice
#6
Chapter 8: Hwa I'm glad you're okay!
But I can't wait for what's next!
Thanks for the update <3
Awake-In-The-Night
#7
Chapter 7: Hii i actually like all the options you came up with!! If you have time please write them all!! Sorry for the shamelessness xD
Goddess-of-Love
#8
Chapter 6: This chapter was difficult at points because it's hard to see Ren's innocent narrative, especially because we know what's coming. But all-in-all you did a good job, especially with helping give your readers depth into the character. As for Minhyun ... well I think that was my favorite part; the very end. I need to know what happened! I have my own suspicions (I think JR is cheating on Min now), but I can't wait to see what the reality of it is. Also, this developing Minren is very tantalizing. ^^

I can't wait till your next update and I really hope that writing can help make things better for you. You're a fabulous author, I love getting updates from you.
Polarbear_ice
#9
Chapter 6: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO UPDATE XD PAR-TAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
But now Im sad that you've gotten miserable TT^TT
No matter! We're gonna get through this!
You, you're friends, Family, the readers and me!
Yep Yep.....we, we can do the Macarena or something!
Goddess-of-Love
#10
Chapter 5: Author-nim, why must you do this to me? Every chapter I have to reassess my feelings for every character. Haha xD. I was starting to really cool with Minhyun and then he goes and does this stupid 'Jr and I were meant for each other'-stuff and it's blucch. Jr is a cheater, if Min thinks he won't do it again he's delusional. I'm happy Ren and I see eye-to-eye on this. I think in this chapter Ren really became a lot more human and relatable. He started high-strung diva to guilty for taking things to far. I felt bad for everyone after the little stunt on stage ... poor JR, poor Min, and poor Ren. I'm just realizing that in all this goo Aron is no where to be found. hahah

Fab chapter, I really hope you feel the desire to continue. I'm sorry if your time right now is particularly difficult. But inspiration is prone to strike at any time, don't give up hope yet. <3