Trial and Tribulation

Description

"I've done no such things as to what you've accused me of," Chanyeol says again but his voice is weak, quivering in places that makes Chanyeol's words seem halfhearted and strangled. "I've done no such things."

Foreword

No forward since this is a quick thing I wrote. It is kind of like a mini oneshot.

Comments

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Aidemstarz
#1
Chapter 1: Pretty neat. I look forward to reading the sequel..
bloodicing
#2
Chapter 2: Yaaaay! :D thank u! N I shall anticipate it :D
xycouple #3
Chapter 2: thank you... thank you very much...
suibian
#4
Chapter 2: I'm looking forward..... to it. /rolls, squirms
bloodicing
#5
Chapter 1: Sequel juseyooooo! :O that was very very beautifully written! It feels like a cliffhanger for me because Krisus... Why doesn't he do anything? Isn't he like, the No. 1 angel? What is a no.1 angel if he doesn't have an ounce of influence/power ? Or at least initiative / creativity to help? ;A;
angryvirus #6
The way you write is so beautiful. ; u ; Poor Chanyeol bb. I felt more sympathetic to him despite him being a demon and fed up with the older angels despite being ... well, angels. Sequel, please? /whispers.
Mr_Koala #7
Chapter 1: This was really good ;) I like your style
suibian
#8
Chapter 1: /FLIPS SHIETS!
DAMN!! WHY YOU STOPPED IT HERE?
I DEMAND SEQUEL!! > 3 <
HOW CAN WUFAN LET THEM KILL CHANYEOL IF HE'S THE DAMNED FIRST CREATED ANGEL.. SHEEHS! IM SO MAD!!!!!
P.S. DON'T LET CHANYEOL BE KILLED!
mink_amiel23 #9
Chapter 1: wow, you should write it to one complete story. it's great! really
BlackPea
#10
Chapter 1: I like this idea so much ;~; sequel please? ;~;