he was the one. (one-shot)

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'cause you said, said he was the one; baby, yes you said, said you were in love...'cause when you left me, you said that you wouldn't be coming back. remember that? 

Foreword

lookin’ at you now, i can tell

that you and your new relationship ain’t goin’ well

there’s no reason your name should come up on my cell

unless you’re unhappy, but that shouldn’t be the case -

 

‘cause you said he was the one.

 

 

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starring: kim jongin, jung soojung, and oh sehun


 

 

 

 

AUTHOR’S NOTES;

basically just a songfic (using jesse mccartney’s “told you so”)

pairing is sekaistal, in case that wasn’t obvious enough xD

 
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niss125 #1
Chapter 2: oh my godd
its damn good
kurdoodle #2
Chapter 2: SOBBING
ok ok i'm alright now. i relate to this so much, you don't even know. (maybe because this is kind of what happened to me /gets bricked -- but maybe not as dramatic who knows)
no words can describe how much i love sekaistal. there are so many quotable quotes here that i can't list them all. it just makes me so sad that sehun can't find it within himself to take her back even though ~he loves her so much~ but at the same time, i can understand. things can't be the same anymore, considering that she had left him in the first place.
i also agree that soojung should figure herself out first. but dang, you could tell that jongin and sehun loved/loves her like crazy. it's even more heartbreaking that they are best friends and i just hope that in the future things can get better for everyone involved ;_; sekaistal are my babies aspofhd;slkga;ds
fxwhuut #3
Chapter 2: sEkaistal is love omg i don't think i'm able to choose between sestal/kaistal/sekai 'cause they're just HNGGGGG???? i actually teared up a bit huhu i feel bad for everyone. if i were soojung i think i might do the same thing otl
kreasetine #4
Chapter 2: This story really has a great meaning to it.
I hope you make an epilogue soon! ^^
iwannalivefortoday #5
Chapter 2: When I read the first chapter months ago, I just couldn't figure out how I felt about it. I mean, I love the way the way you conveyed their emotions, but still I was left so confused at the end. And after this update I still am, but less I guess.
But then thinking more about it, that's how love actually works right? There's not just black or white, so I think that's why it's not like Soojung can just go back to Sehun like nothing happened. I feel like everyone is to blame but at the same time not, because they did make their own decisions but there's also the fact that they were following their hearts, which we all know can be a lil s**t sometimes (sorry for the bad word). I hope you got what I meant.
They're young and I believe at this age that losing someone (well not physically, meaning death though) who means the world to you is devastating. I don't mean to say that you start to don't care when you get older, but you can't beat the passionate heart of someone in their 20s. You live emotions and feelings at the max, as though there's not a tomorrow.
Soojung was foolish but that doesn't mean she doesn't care about them..it seems like she just played with the boys' hearts but she was exposed herself to the pain too. I don't truly agree with people saying when loving two people, to choose the second one because you wouldn't have fallen for her/him if you really loved the first. Love is complicated, that's all, every situation is different, people are different.
Jongin and Sehun can't be the same with each other anymore, and it makes me sad. It wasn't revealed much about KaiStal relationship but the way you portrayed SeStal's love story was so beautiful. It's like they had each other and that was enough to endure the hard traing they were undergoing. I loved the way you gave credit also to secondary characters, to show that they have friends who care about them and wants to help them as well.
moryeong9 #6
Chapter 2: SeKaiStal is my top 3 otp XD idk why but they just fit perfectly lol. And btw, the angst is so strong here T^T poor Sehun. Poor Soojung. And poor Kai. It's a condition when you can't really blame each other because everyone made a mistakes ._.
kurdoodle #7
Chapter 1: aaaah this is so heartbreakingly beautiful ;_; sekaistal is so good aspdofhadslg; I LOVE THEM SO MUCH i don't care which way it ends up but for right now i'm rooting for sehun cuz gosh dangit HE'S BEEN HEARTBROKEN WAY TOO MANY TIMES and all the emotions were just so tangible and my heart was constricting with feels because goodness this is just so flawless aspdohfdsk;g WOW ok <333 can't wait for the next part omg
thelastghostgirl #8
Chapter 1: this is not over right ? I'm so sad right now :( sestal or kaistal is alright with me, as long soojung happy :*
kurdoodle #9
sekaistal is everything. looking forward to this!
iwannalivefortoday #10
There's not enough love for SeKaiStal here on AFF so I'm glad I found this story :P
Yayyy ^~^
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