Chapter 1: I like this but im alittle lost,,,haha... so they were friends but wasnt close? And junnie likes jae but jae didnt know, and at the end their together??
Chapter 1: awesome. i kinda assumed that was the reason zelo left in the first place so at the end i was like aha! i knew it!
but the ending was really good with him getting signed to TS. the parents reaction is a bit heartbreaking and zelo is a good kid not hating them but at least saying they loved him enough to keep him.
Chapter 1: woahh..me..totally..love..it! its hard to find a very good long one-shot.. its over 14000 words, and not to mention i really like long one.. ^^ write more author-nim.. u r a really good author, u have a good plot and u expand ur idea really well.. u make me read word by word w/o skipping,the emotions just nice, so yeah, its really good.. fighting! ^^
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